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Sentences 004: Conference call, early walks, stickler, ideas

While on a conference call, I forgot to mute my microphone and more than 200 people could hear my gummi bear plastic wrapper rustling.

I love taking walks in the early morning, when the world is still serene and peaceful.

I own up, I'm a bit of a stickler for good, grammatical emails.

Don't be deterred by the dressing-down of your boss. Your idea will certainly catch on in the long run!

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While on a conference call, I forgot to mute my microphone and more than 200 people could hear my gummi bear plastic wrapper rustling.the rustling noises from the plastic wrapping of my gummy bears.

I love taking walks in the early morning, when the world is still serene and peaceful.

I own up, I'madmit that I could be a bit of a stickler for good,when it comes to grammatically correct emails.

Don't be deterred by the dressing-down of your bosyour boss' criticisms.

Your idea will certainly catch on in the long run!

Sentences 004: Conference call, early walks, stickler, ideas

While on a conference call, I forgot to mute my microphone and more than 200 people could hear my gummi bear plastic wrapper rustling.

I love taking walks in the early morning, when the world is still serene and peaceful.

I own upadmit, I'm a bit of a stickler for good, grammatical emails.

'I admit' makes more sense and sounds better to me in this context.

Don't be deterred by thea dressing-down ofrom your boss.

You receive a 'dressing-down' from someone. Unless you meant that the boss was the one who was being told off?

Your idea will certainly catch on in the long run!

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Brilliant, well done! :)

Sentences 004: Conference call, early walks, stickler, ideas


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While on a conference call, I forgot to mute my microphone and more than 200 people could hear my gummi bear plastic wrapper rustling.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

While on a conference call, I forgot to mute my microphone and more than 200 people could hear my gummi bear plastic wrapper rustling.the rustling noises from the plastic wrapping of my gummy bears.

I love taking walks in the early morning, when the world is still serene and peaceful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I own up, I'm a bit of a stickler for good, grammatical emails.


I own upadmit, I'm a bit of a stickler for good, grammatical emails.

'I admit' makes more sense and sounds better to me in this context.

I own up, I'madmit that I could be a bit of a stickler for good,when it comes to grammatically correct emails.

Don't be deterred by the dressing-down of your boss.


Don't be deterred by thea dressing-down ofrom your boss.

You receive a 'dressing-down' from someone. Unless you meant that the boss was the one who was being told off?

Don't be deterred by the dressing-down of your bosyour boss' criticisms.

Your idea will certainly catch on in the long run!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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