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heyyawn

July 1, 2021

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1. Although it is safe to say that not a single law has been framed because of anything Karen said; and yet, she demands the world exist according to her standards with little regard for others.
2. With the end of a series of exams, Jan was so tired that nothing was left in his mind.
3. Although Jan admits that he showers frequently, he shows that the intense physical work still makes him stink.

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1. Although it is safe to say that not a single law has been framed because of anything Karen said; and yet, she demands the world exist according to her standards with little regard for otherKaren has no power to put any law into effect, yet she has little regard for others and demands the world to revolve around her standards.

The sentence is very clunky. I'm not sure what you were trying to say but I hope this is close!

2. With the end of a series ofAfter sitting through multiple exams, Jan was so tired that there was nothing was left in his mind.

3. Although Jan admits that hDespite showersing frequently, he shows that the intense physical work still makes himJan stink.

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heyyawn

July 2, 2021

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1. Although it is safe to say that not a single law has been framed because of anything Karen said; and yet, she demands the world exist according to her standards with little regard for otherKaren has no power to put any law into effect, yet she has little regard for others and demands the world to revolve around her standards.

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Thank you very much for the corrections!

Sentence 4 – 6


1. Although it is safe to say that not a single law has been framed because of anything Karen said; and yet, she demands the world exist according to her standards with little regard for others.


1. Although it is safe to say that not a single law has been framed because of anything Karen said; and yet, she demands the world exist according to her standards with little regard for otherKaren has no power to put any law into effect, yet she has little regard for others and demands the world to revolve around her standards.

The sentence is very clunky. I'm not sure what you were trying to say but I hope this is close!

2. With the end of a series of exams, Jan was so tired that nothing was left in his mind.


2. With the end of a series ofAfter sitting through multiple exams, Jan was so tired that there was nothing was left in his mind.

3. Although Jan admits that he showers frequently, he shows that the intense physical work still makes him stink.


3. Although Jan admits that hDespite showersing frequently, he shows that the intense physical work still makes himJan stink.

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