June 13, 2022
Self study
Today I watch a video on YouTube about the dark side of self study. The man try to convey an idea that "Self-study is difficult and sometimes it makes us feel stupid". Each of us tried to do what he want, became better, but we gave up soon. When we want to start to do something, we are full of motivation, we plan all week, but then when we do nothing one day, we feel ourselves lazy and unmotivated. It is important to understand that this feeling is fake, we aren't lazy and unmotivated at all. A very rich choice hinders us. There are many videos, books and other information in the world. Have choice is good, but sometimes it is harmful. We can't focus on one thing and we are frustrated instead of we do one thing. We need to choose one thing and just do it( imagine Shia LaBeouf).
Today I watched a video on YouTube about the dark side of self -study.
The man tryied to convey anthe idea that "Self-study is difficult and sometimes it makes us feel stupid".
Each of us tried to do what he want,ed, to becaome better, but we soon gave up soon.
When we want to start to dodoing something, we are full of motivation, we plan all week, but then when we do nothing one day, we feel ourselvesend up feeling lazy and unmotivated.
It is important to understand that this feeling is fake, we aren't lazy and unmotivated at all.
A very rich choice hinders ubig factor hinders us - choices.
There are many videos, books and other information in the world.
HaveBeing able to choicose is good, but sometimes it is harmful.
We can't focus on one thing and we areone thing when we do multiple things at the same time and we end up being frustrated i. Instead of we dowe can do focus on doing one thing.
We need to choose one thing and just do it.( imagine Shia LaBeouf).
Self -study
Need a hyphen here
Today I watched a video on YouTube about the dark side of self -study.
Past tense of 'watch' - 'watched'
The man trynarrator tried to convey anthe idea that "Self-study is difficult and sometimes it makes us feel stupid".
"The man" - 'narrator' is more appropriate, explains to the reader that the person who made the video is expressing this idea.
Also, use definite article - the, because it is a specific idea :3
Each of us tried to do what he want,ed, we became better, but wethen we soon gave up soon.
Stick to one tense - the past tense
- "Soon give up" - it's a collocation phrase, often used together in this way
When we want to start to dobegin something, we are full of motivation, we plan all week, but then when we do nothing one day, we feel ourselves lazy and unmotivated.
"We feel ourselves", is a common mistake for Russian learners to make in English. You can just simply say 'we feel' or 'we feel ... within ourselves'
A very richimportant choice hinders us.
Rich - I would not use this word. Perhaps use important
Haveing choice is good, but sometimes it is harmful.
Use a gerund here :3
We can't focus on one thingmultiple things at once and we are frustrated, instead of we, we can do one thing.
I think you meant to say 'multiple/many things' instead of 'one thing' :3
We need to choose one thing and just do it( i! (Imagine Shia LaBeouf).
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JUST DO IT!!!) Very well done! :3 Keep up the good work with your English journals! They're very enjoyable to read and discuss interesting subjects
June 13, 2022
Thanks, Today is last day of my vacation. I hope my work don't lower my motivation and I keep up. "Learning language is a marathon, not sprint" (c) Alisha
June 13, 2022
It's commendable to "self-study" ;3 in your spare time, especially vacation time! Keep it up and remember consistency is key! Если тебе нужна моя помощь, я здесь
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Self study Self Need a hyphen here |
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Today I watch a video on YouTube about the dark side of self study. Today I watched a video on YouTube about the dark side of self Past tense of 'watch' - 'watched' Today I watched a video on YouTube about the dark side of self |
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The man try to convey an idea that "Self-study is difficult and sometimes it makes us feel stupid". The "The man" - 'narrator' is more appropriate, explains to the reader that the person who made the video is expressing this idea. Also, use definite article - the, because it is a specific idea :3 The man tr |
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Each of us tried to do what he want, became better, but we gave up soon. Each of us tried to do what he want Stick to one tense - the past tense - "Soon give up" - it's a collocation phrase, often used together in this way Each of us tried to do what he want |
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When we want to start to do something, we are full of motivation, we plan all week, but then when we do nothing one day, we feel ourselves lazy and unmotivated. When we want to "We feel ourselves", is a common mistake for Russian learners to make in English. You can just simply say 'we feel' or 'we feel ... within ourselves' When we want to start |
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It is important to understand that this feeling is fake, we aren't lazy and unmotivated at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A very rich choice hinders us. A very Rich - I would not use this word. Perhaps use important A very |
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There are many videos, books and other information in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Have choice is good, but sometimes it is harmful. Hav Use a gerund here :3
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We can't focus on one thing and we are frustrated instead of we do one thing. We can't focus on I think you meant to say 'multiple/many things' instead of 'one thing' :3 We can't focus on |
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We need to choose one thing and just do it( imagine Shia LaBeouf). We need to choose one thing and just do it Punctuation We need to choose one thing and just do it.( imagine Shia LaBeouf). |
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