July 23, 2022
self-introduction
hello
my name is mayuxian.i am from china gansu.i am 16 yeas old.i like play basketball.i am a high school student.my maths is good and i like maths.but my english is very bed.
i want to make a friend.if he/she can teach me english,it is so good.
my emil is [email protected]
my name is ma yuxian. i am from china gansu.gansu in china. i am 16 years old. i like to play basketball. i am a high school student. my maths grade is good, and i like maths. but my english is very bead.
不好，不坏。O K。
i want to make a friend.if he/ss. if they can teach me english,it is so that’s very good.
很=“very”.
my email is [email protected]
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你的英文不是好，和不是坏。是OK。Work on grammar and spelling.
hHello
Capitalize first the word of sentences or letters.
mMy name is mMayuxian.i I am from cGansu, China gansu.i I am 16 yeas old.i I like to play basketball.i I am a high school student.m My maths is good and iI like maths., but my eEnglish is very bead.
Capitalize the first letter of the first word in each sentence. Capitalize “I” when talking about yourself. Capitalize the names of places and languages (proper nouns).
Put a space after each period - this is not automatic in English typing.
In English, when describing a place, we put the more specific location (like a city name) first, and then the larger area. This means that we would say “Gansu, China” not “China Gansu”.
iI want to make a friend.i If he/she can teach me eEnglish,it is so that would be good.
Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence. Space after periods and commas.
When using conditionals like “if”, the dependent clause has to be future tense: “it is good” becomes “that would be good.
mMy emil is [email protected]
Capitalize the first letter in the first word in the sentence.
sSelf-introduction
hHello!
mMy name is mMayuxian.i I am from china gansu.iGansu Province, China. I am 16 years old.i I like to play basketball.i I am a high school student.m My maths is good and iI like maths.b But my eEnglish is very bead.
When you say you are from [Province], [Country], or [City], [Country], you put a comma in between, and the lower level place comes first. Note that "maths" is correct but typically British English. In American English, we say "math" without the "s" at the end. But you can use either.
iI want to make a friend.i If he/ or she canould teach me eEnglish, it is sowould be very good.
mMy email is [email protected].
Feedback
A very good start. Focus a bit on capitalization and punctuation rules and you will make quick progress.
A few suggestions on good places to meet people who can teach English: www.hellotalk.com, www.conversationexchange.com, www.italki.com (this one is typically for paid tutors though).
sSelf-i Introduction
hHello
You always start sentences with capital letters
mMy name is mayuxian.i I am from china gansu.iGansu in China. I am 16 years old.i I like to play basketball.i I am a high school student.my maths is good I am good at maths and iI like maths.it but my english is very bead.
The pronoun I is always capitalized. Places and countries too. You like TO do something, you can like an object like “I like basketballs” but if you like an action like “playing” you use to
iI want to make a friend.i If he/ or she can teach me english,it is so it would be very good.
In the last sentence you need to use would be instead of is because it is dépendant on if you can find this person. It is not certain
mMy email is [email protected]
Feedback
Overall great job. Continue practicing capitalizing your letters
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hello
You always start sentences with capital letters
Capitalize first the word of sentences or letters. |
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my name is mayuxian.i am from china gansu.i am 16 yeas old.i like play basketball.i am a high school student.my maths is good and i like maths.but my english is very bed.
The pronoun I is always capitalized. Places and countries too. You like TO do something, you can like an object like “I like basketballs” but if you like an action like “playing” you use to
When you say you are from [Province], [Country], or [City], [Country], you put a comma in between, and the lower level place comes first. Note that "maths" is correct but typically British English. In American English, we say "math" without the "s" at the end. But you can use either.
Capitalize the first letter of the first word in each sentence. Capitalize “I” when talking about yourself. Capitalize the names of places and languages (proper nouns). Put a space after each period - this is not automatic in English typing. In English, when describing a place, we put the more specific location (like a city name) first, and then the larger area. This means that we would say “Gansu, China” not “China Gansu”. my name is ma yuxian. i am from 不好，不坏。O K。 |
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i want to make a friend.if he/she can teach me english,it is so good.
In the last sentence you need to use would be instead of is because it is dépendant on if you can find this person. It is not certain
Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence. Space after periods and commas. When using conditionals like “if”, the dependent clause has to be future tense: “it is good” becomes “that would be good. i want to make 很=“very”. |
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my emil is [email protected]
Capitalize the first letter in the first word in the sentence. my email is [email protected] |
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