July 19, 2022
self-introduction
Brought up in a family in which quarrels and tensions are common, i am kind of nervious and anxious when in crowed situation. I have been not good at dealing with others since i was a little kid. Hence, i spend most time talking to myself instead of having fun with others.
After graduation from university, i landed a job recommended by my classmate who once worked there as an intern as exchange for my favor helping his graduation thesis. It's a simple job. All i need do is to get on office at 10am and get off at 5pm with two-day weekend, which is rare in this era where alleged 996-working-style(9am-9pm,six days per week) prevails.
self-introduction
BI was brought up in a family in whichwhere quarrels and tensions awere common, iI am kind of nervious and anxious when in crowed situations.
You could also say "when in big crowds" or "around lots of people"
I have not been not good at dealing with others since iI was a little kid.
HenceSo, iI spend most time talking to myself instead of having fun with others.
"Hence" isn't commonly used in writing now
After graduation from university, iI landed a job recommended by my classmate who once worked there as an intern asin exchange for my favore helping him on his graduation thesis.
It's a simple job.
All iI need to do is to get onto the office at 10am and get off at 5pm with a two-day weekend, which is rare in this era where the alleged 996-working-style (9am-9pm,six days per week) prevails.
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Good writing! Just remember when using "I" to talk about yourself, it is always a capital :)
July 19, 2022
Thanks so much for your correction for me. I will keep your advice in my mind.
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self-introduction This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Brought up in a family in which quarrels and tensions are common, i am kind of nervious and anxious when in crowed situation.
You could also say "when in big crowds" or "around lots of people" |
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I have been not good at dealing with others since i was a little kid. I have not been |
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Hence, i spend most time talking to myself instead of having fun with others.
"Hence" isn't commonly used in writing now |
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After graduation from university, i landed a job recommended by my classmate who once worked there as an intern as exchange for my favor helping his graduation thesis. After graduation from university, |
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It's a simple job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All i need do is to get on office at 10am and get off at 5pm with two-day weekend, which is rare in this era where alleged 996-working-style(9am-9pm,six days per week) prevails. All |
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