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happiness

Nov. 30, 2023

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Self-Introduction

Hi Everyone!
I'm happiness from Osaka. I lived in California for five and a half years. My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated! Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible. I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

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Hi Eeveryone!

I'm hHappiness from Osaka.

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

Of course, I'm willing(more than) happy to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

I like to make friends all over the worldwide, so please add me as your friend!

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happiness

March 28, 2024

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Nice to meet you, gotff! Thank you for reading and correcting my entry! Your sentences are clear and concise. Writing like you is my goal. ^^

Self-Introduction

Hi Eeveryone!

I'm happiness from Osaka.

I previously lived in California for five and a half years.

This sounds a bit awkward to me if you don't include some sort of time reference.

My English writing abilityskills needs improving/improvement, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated(you find) - I'd appreciate any feedback!

Your original is fine, but this sounds more natural to me. "All feedback is appreciated" sounds rather corporate...

Of course, I'm willinghappy to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

"willing to" generally means that you don't particularly want to, but you can tolerate doing so. You'd sound much friendlier if you said "I'm happy to" or "I'd be happy to."

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Hi Hapi! Nice to connect with you here as well ^^

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happiness

Dec. 1, 2023

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Hi Mizton-chan!! I'm delighted you corrected my entry here on LangCorrect. Your corrections and explanations were helpful. I copied my self-introduction from Lang-8 and pasted it here. ^^

Self-Introduction

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Hi Eeveryone!

I'm happiness from Osaka.

I lived in California for five and a half years.

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

Of course, I'm also willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

Feedback

Welcome! Happy to have you here. I am an American living in Tochigi :)

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happiness

Dec. 1, 2023

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Nice to meet you, Kathryn! Thank you for reading and correcting my entry. You're living in Tochigi! How do you like Japan so far? ^^

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Kathryn

Dec. 3, 2023

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I love it! I have lived here for almost four years now :)

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happiness

Dec. 4, 2023

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Nice! I hope you have many wonderful experiences in Japan. I'm looking forward to reading your entries! ^^

My English writing ability needs improving,I can't write as well as I'd like so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

I feel like "X-ability" isn't very common in English even though I seem to be able to get away with adding ~力 to almost anything I want in Japanese... Anyway, the original sentence was great, but saying "I can't ___ very well" or "I can't ___ as well as I'd like" I think is more natural. Since you're writing is clearly not bad, I chose the latter.

I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

As Harrison suggested, "FROM all over the world" is maybe more accurate here? I just want to make sure the difference is clear.

"Make friends all over the world" -> Go on trips all over the world to make friends.
"Make friends (who are) from all over the world" -> Have friends who are from many places.

Feedback

Welcome to the site!

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happiness

Dec. 1, 2023

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Nice to meet you, splinterofchaos! Thank you for your corrections and detailed explanations. They were very helpful!

Self-Introduction

Hi Eeveryone!

I'm happiness from Osaka.

I lived in California for five and a half years.

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

I like to make friends from all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

Feedback

Hi happiness! Your self-introduction is very well written! It's nice to see you on LangCorrect. :) I look forward to reading your posts!

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happiness

Nov. 30, 2023

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Nice to meet you, harrison! Thank you for your corrections and comments. I'll read your post later. I'd be grateful if you could add me to your friend's list. Let's help each other improve! ^^

Hi Eeveryone!

I'm happiness from Osaka.

I lived in California for five and a half years.

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes [if you spot them] - all feedback is appreciated!

Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

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happiness

Nov. 30, 2023

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O-Star!!! Thank you for correcting my first post here on LangCorrect. I'm very glad you found me. I hope we continue to help each other as same as on Lang-8. ^^

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OStar

Nov. 30, 2023

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Hi happiness-san! You're welcome. ^^ I will continue posting on Lang-8 until its service ends. See you!

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happiness

Dec. 1, 2023

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I'll try to post on Lang-8 as much as I can, too! Thanks, O-Star! ^^

Self-Introduction

Hi Everyone!

I'm happiness from Osaka.

I lived in California for five and a half years.

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

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happiness

Nov. 30, 2023

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Hi Mike! I'm very glad you found me on this site. Thank you for your corrections! Let's learn languages together, just like Lang-8. ^^

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mike1

Nov. 30, 2023

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Hi Happinessさん,
I’m glad we can continue our friendship on LangCorrect! Let’s do our best!
よろしくお願いします

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happiness

Dec. 1, 2023

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こちらこそ!良かったです。これからもお友達でいられるのは本当に嬉しいです。よろしくお願いします。^^

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I previously lived in California for five and a half years.

This sounds a bit awkward to me if you don't include some sort of time reference.

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!


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My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes [if you spot them] - all feedback is appreciated!

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My English writing ability needs improving,I can't write as well as I'd like so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

I feel like "X-ability" isn't very common in English even though I seem to be able to get away with adding ~力 to almost anything I want in Japanese... Anyway, the original sentence was great, but saying "I can't ___ very well" or "I can't ___ as well as I'd like" I think is more natural. Since you're writing is clearly not bad, I chose the latter.

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My English writing abilityskills needs improving/improvement, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated(you find) - I'd appreciate any feedback!

Your original is fine, but this sounds more natural to me. "All feedback is appreciated" sounds rather corporate...

My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!

Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.


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Of course, I'm also willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

Of course, I'm willinghappy to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

"willing to" generally means that you don't particularly want to, but you can tolerate doing so. You'd sound much friendlier if you said "I'm happy to" or "I'd be happy to."

Of course, I'm willing(more than) happy to help Japanese learners as much as possible.

I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!


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I like to make friends from all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!

As Harrison suggested, "FROM all over the world" is maybe more accurate here? I just want to make sure the difference is clear. "Make friends all over the world" -> Go on trips all over the world to make friends. "Make friends (who are) from all over the world" -> Have friends who are from many places.

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I like to make friends all over the worldwide, so please add me as your friend!

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