Nov. 30, 2023
Hi Everyone!
I'm happiness from Osaka. I lived in California for five and a half years. My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated! Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible. I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!
Hi Eeveryone!
I'm hHappiness from Osaka.
My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!
Of course, I'm willing(more than) happy to help Japanese learners as much as possible.
I like to make friends all over the worldwide, so please add me as your friend!
Self-Introduction
Hi Eeveryone!
I'm happiness from Osaka.
I previously lived in California for five and a half years.
This sounds a bit awkward to me if you don't include some sort of time reference.
My English writing abilityskills needs improving/improvement, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated(you find) - I'd appreciate any feedback!
Your original is fine, but this sounds more natural to me. "All feedback is appreciated" sounds rather corporate...
Of course, I'm willinghappy to help Japanese learners as much as possible.
"willing to" generally means that you don't particularly want to, but you can tolerate doing so. You'd sound much friendlier if you said "I'm happy to" or "I'd be happy to."
Feedback
Hi Hapi! Nice to connect with you here as well ^^
Self-Introduction
Or "Self Introduction"
Hi Eeveryone!
I'm happiness from Osaka.
I lived in California for five and a half years.
My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!
Of course, I'm also willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.
I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!
Feedback
Welcome! Happy to have you here. I am an American living in Tochigi :)
My English writing ability needs improving,I can't write as well as I'd like so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!
I feel like "X-ability" isn't very common in English even though I seem to be able to get away with adding ~力 to almost anything I want in Japanese... Anyway, the original sentence was great, but saying "I can't ___ very well" or "I can't ___ as well as I'd like" I think is more natural. Since you're writing is clearly not bad, I chose the latter.
I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!
As Harrison suggested, "FROM all over the world" is maybe more accurate here? I just want to make sure the difference is clear.
"Make friends all over the world" -> Go on trips all over the world to make friends.
"Make friends (who are) from all over the world" -> Have friends who are from many places.
Feedback
Welcome to the site!
Self-Introduction
Hi Eeveryone!
I'm happiness from Osaka.
I lived in California for five and a half years.
My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!
Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.
I like to make friends from all over the world, so please add me as your friend!
Feedback
Hi happiness! Your self-introduction is very well written! It's nice to see you on LangCorrect. :) I look forward to reading your posts!
Hi Eeveryone!
I'm happiness from Osaka.
I lived in California for five and a half years.
My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes [if you spot them] - all feedback is appreciated!
Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.
I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!
Self-Introduction
Hi Everyone!
I'm happiness from Osaka.
I lived in California for five and a half years.
My English writing ability needs improving, so please correct any mistakes - all feedback is appreciated!
Of course, I'm willing to help Japanese learners as much as possible.
I like to make friends all over the world, so please add me as your friend!
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I feel like "X-ability" isn't very common in English even though I seem to be able to get away with adding ~力 to almost anything I want in Japanese... Anyway, the original sentence was great, but saying "I can't ___ very well" or "I can't ___ as well as I'd like" I think is more natural. Since you're writing is clearly not bad, I chose the latter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My English writing Your original is fine, but this sounds more natural to me. "All feedback is appreciated" sounds rather corporate... My English |
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