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milkyway

Aug. 20, 2022

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Self Introduce

Because of self introduce on this site, I tried to write it.

I'm Japanese, live in near Nagoya city.
I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, drew illustrations.
I am getting fat recently, I must shape up.

And, what can I write more?

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Self Introducetion

Because ofI have to write a self introduce tion for this site, I triedhere is my attempt of trying to write itone.

I'm Japanese, and I live in near Nagoya city.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, dreand draw illustrations.¶

Things which I like to do are; eat, watch YouTube, read books, and dra
w illustrations.

I am have been getting fat recently, I must get in shape.¶

I am have been getting fat recently, due to this, I need to get in
shape up.

And, what can I write more about?

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Grammar is the tricky part.

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milkyway

Aug. 21, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

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diojb23

Aug. 21, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

いえいえ。とても大丈夫ですよ。
頑張ってください。

Self Introducetion

Because of selfI want to introduce myself on this site, I tried to write ithis.

複雑な文ですね。You almost got it!

I'm Japanese, and live in near the city of Nagoya city.

or

I'm Japanese and I live near the city of Nagoya.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, and dreaw illustrations.

すごい!

I am’ve been getting fat recently, so I must shape up.

or even better:

I’ve been gaining weight recently so I must shape up.

And, what more can I write more?

いいです。

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いい自己紹介だと思います。よく出来ました!

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milkyway

Aug. 21, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Self Introducetion

Because ofI tried to write a self introduce ontion for this site, I tried to write it.

I'm Japanese, live ing near Nagoya city.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, dreaw illustrations.

I am getting fat recently,; I must shape up.

I am getting fat recently; I must get into shape.

And, what more can I write more?

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milkyway

Aug. 21, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Self -Introducetion

Because ofthere is a place for a self -introducetion on this site, I tried to write itone.

I'm Japanese,. I live in near Nagoya city.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, and dreaw illustrations.

I am've been getting fat recently,. I mustneed to shape up.

And, whatWhat more can I write more?

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milkyway

Aug. 21, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

I am getting fat recently, I must shape up.


I am've been getting fat recently,. I mustneed to shape up.

I am getting fat recently,; I must shape up.

I am getting fat recently; I must get into shape.

I am’ve been getting fat recently, so I must shape up.

or even better: I’ve been gaining weight recently so I must shape up.

I am have been getting fat recently, I must get in shape.¶

I am have been getting fat recently, due to this, I need to get in
shape up.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, drew illustrations.


I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, and dreaw illustrations.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, dreaw illustrations.

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, and dreaw illustrations.

すごい!

I like to eat, watch YouTube, read books, dreand draw illustrations.¶

Things which I like to do are; eat, watch YouTube, read books, and dra
w illustrations.

Self Introduce


Self -Introducetion

Self Introducetion

Self Introducetion

Self Introducetion

Because of self introduce on this site, I tried to write it.


Because ofthere is a place for a self -introducetion on this site, I tried to write itone.

Because ofI tried to write a self introduce ontion for this site, I tried to write it.

Because of selfI want to introduce myself on this site, I tried to write ithis.

複雑な文ですね。You almost got it!

Because ofI have to write a self introduce tion for this site, I triedhere is my attempt of trying to write itone.

I'm Japanese, live in near Nagoya city.


I'm Japanese,. I live in near Nagoya city.

I'm Japanese, live ing near Nagoya city.

I'm Japanese, and live in near the city of Nagoya city.

or I'm Japanese and I live near the city of Nagoya.

I'm Japanese, and I live in near Nagoya city.

And, what can I write more?


And, whatWhat more can I write more?

And, what more can I write more?

And, what more can I write more?

いいです。

And, what can I write more about?

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