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ruby

Jan. 7, 2020

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Self-driving Vehicles

Recently we've been hearing a lot about autonomous vehicles mainly from the news media.
It seems like self-driving cars perform better than human-driven ones.
I personally hope that self-driving vehicles can prevail as soon as possible because I am not good at driving.

However, there seems to be some issues that yet to be resolved.
Some people say that self-driving vehicles can solve the traffic congesting problem. Others have a completely opposite opinion. They claim that if autonomous cars fully replace ones with human drivers, it could lead to cities becoming more congested. This is because fewer people would use a public transportation system.
I think it depends on how expensive they including a maintenance fee will be, or how safe they will be.


最近、自動運転車についてメディアなどで、いろいろ耳にする。
自動運転車は人間が運転する車よりもパフォーマンスが良いようです。
私は運転が苦手なので、自動運転車ができるだけ早く普及することを個人的に望んでいます。

ただし、まだ解決されていない問題があるようです。
自動運転車は交通渋滞の問題を解決できると言う人もいます。 また、全く反対の意見を持つ人もいます。彼らは、自動運転車が人間が運転する車に完全にとってかわると、都市がより混雑するようになる可能性があると主張しています。 これは、公共交通機関を利用する人が少なくなるためです。
メンテナンス費用を含んで、自動運転車がどれくらい高価になるか、またはどれだけ安全かによって決まると思います。

読んでくれてありがとう

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Self-driving Vehicles

Recently we've been hearing a lot about autonomous vehicles, mainly from the news media.

It seems likethat self-driving cars perform better than human-driven ones.

Using "like" here isn't necessarily wrong, but it feels more like you're saying something based on observations you have personally made yourself and not from information gathered from other courses.

I personally hope that self-driving vehicles can prevail as soon as possible because I am not good at driving.

However, there seems to be some issues that have yet to be resolved.

Some people say that self-driving vehicles can solve the the problem of traffic congestiong problem.

Others have a completely opposite opinion.

They claim that if autonomous cars fully replace ones with human drivers, it could lead to cities becoming more congested.

This is because fewer people would use a public transportation system.

I think it depends on how expensive theyautonomous vehicles will be, including a maintenance fee will be, ors, and how safe they will be.

ruby's avatar
ruby

Jan. 8, 2020

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Thank you so much for the corrections, Bees san!

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Bees

Jan. 9, 2020

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No problem! :D

Self-driving Vehicles

Recently we've been hearing a lot about autonomous vehicles mainly from the news media.

However, there seems to be some issues that are yet to be resolved.

Some people say that self-driving vehicles can solve the traffic congestiong problems.

This is because fewer people would use a public transportation system.

I think it depends on how expensive they including a maintenance fee will be, or how safe they will be.

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ruby

Jan. 8, 2020

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Thank you very much for the corrections!

Self-driving Vehicles


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Recently we've been hearing a lot about autonomous vehicles mainly from the news media.


Recently we've been hearing a lot about autonomous vehicles mainly from the news media.

Recently we've been hearing a lot about autonomous vehicles, mainly from the news media.

It seems like self-driving cars perform better than human-driven ones.


It seems likethat self-driving cars perform better than human-driven ones.

Using "like" here isn't necessarily wrong, but it feels more like you're saying something based on observations you have personally made yourself and not from information gathered from other courses.

I personally hope that self-driving vehicles can prevail as soon as possible because I am not good at driving.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, there seems to be some issues that yet to be resolved.


However, there seems to be some issues that are yet to be resolved.

However, there seems to be some issues that have yet to be resolved.

Some people say that self-driving vehicles can solve the traffic congesting problem.


Some people say that self-driving vehicles can solve the traffic congestiong problems.

Some people say that self-driving vehicles can solve the the problem of traffic congestiong problem.

Others have a completely opposite opinion.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They claim that if autonomous cars fully replace ones with human drivers, it could lead to cities becoming more congested.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is because fewer people would use a public transportation system.


This is because fewer people would use a public transportation system.

This is because fewer people would use a public transportation system.

I think it depends on how expensive they including a maintenance fee will be, or how safe they will be.


I think it depends on how expensive they including a maintenance fee will be, or how safe they will be.

I think it depends on how expensive theyautonomous vehicles will be, including a maintenance fee will be, ors, and how safe they will be.

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