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Oct. 22, 2022

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To be a member of our basketball club you'll be required to pass a basketball fitness test where your ability to change direction 180 degrees and ability of vertical jump will be tested. Your talent for team sports and team based decision making will be attributes. You'll basically have to show off your speed , endurance and strength. We have 3 to 4 practices per week, the length of which is 120 minutes, and to put it colloquially we are 'as sweaty as pigs' after them.
Our coach has had lots of successes to his name, he makes prudent decisions while making his picks for tournaments. To be selected you must have been efficient in terms of possessions in the last 3 rounds and achieved mastery in one of offensive categories e.g. fast break or basketball cuts. We (Quicklegs) have won the national title in 2019 and we are second in our city's ratings. As for trainings - any type of athletic attire (loose-fitting shorts and vests) will do, for tournaments we have club uniforms - they consist of a sleeveless jersey featuring the number (back and front) and the last name of the player on the back, shorts and athletic shoes.

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To be a member of our basketball club you'll be requirneed to pass a basketball fitness test where your ability to change direction 180 degrees and ability of(your) vertical jump abilities will be tested.

Your talent for team sports and team -based decision making will be attribute(highly valuable) qualities/skills.

You'll basicallyBasically, you'll have to show off your speed , endurance and strength.

We have 3 to 4 practice sessions per week, the lengteach of which islast for 120 minutes, and to put it colloquially we arbecome 'as sweaty as pigs' after them.

Our coach has had lots of successeachievements to his name, he and makes prudent decisions while maken selecting his picks for tournaments.

"selecting" is more specific.

To be selected you must have been be considered "efficient" in terms of possessions in the last 3 rounds and achieved mastery in one of the offensive categories e.g. fast break or basketball cuts.

As for the training sessions - any type of athletic attire (loose-fitting shorts and vests) will do, whereas for tournaments, we have club uniforms - they consist of a sleeveless jersey featuring the number (back and front) and the last name of the player on the back, shorts and athletic shoes.

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To be a member of our basketball club, you'll be required to pass a basketball fitness test where your ability to change direction 180 degrees andbility to your ability of vertical jump will be tested.

Your talent for team sports and team based decision making will be attributes.judged as well

You'll bBasically, you have to show off your speed , endurance, and strength.

We have 3 to 4 practices per week, thefor as leongth of which is 120 minutes, and as 2 hours. After the matter (to put it colloquially) we are '"as sweaty as pigs' after them."

Brackets in English writing are like a separate thought compared to the main sentence. They can be used for jokes or a thought that you want the reader to know you had. For example;
"I hate to break it to you (truly I mean no harm), but that dress does not look good on you"

Our coach has had lots of successes toin his name,; he makes prudent decisions while making his picks for tournaments.

To be selected, you must have been efficient (in terms of possessions) in the last 3 rounds and have achieved mastery in one ofan offensive categories (e.g. fast break or basketball cuts).

We (Quicklegs) have won the national title in 2019 and we are second in our city's ratings.

Removing the we sounds more natural

As for trainings -, any type of athletic attire (loose-fitting shorts and vests) will do, f. For tournaments we have club uniforms -; they consist of a sleeveless jersey featuring the number (back and front) and the last name of the player on the back,. These are paired with shorts and athletic shoes.

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Not bad! You have the right idea majority of the time, but slight nuances hold you back.

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orea5

Oct. 22, 2022

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A really big thank you Thealchemist🙂

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To be a member of our basketball club you'll be required to pass a basketball fitness test where your ability to change direction 180 degrees and ability of vertical jump will be tested.


To be a member of our basketball club, you'll be required to pass a basketball fitness test where your ability to change direction 180 degrees andbility to your ability of vertical jump will be tested.

To be a member of our basketball club you'll be requirneed to pass a basketball fitness test where your ability to change direction 180 degrees and ability of(your) vertical jump abilities will be tested.

Your talent for team sports and team based decision making will be attributes.


Your talent for team sports and team based decision making will be attributes.judged as well

Your talent for team sports and team -based decision making will be attribute(highly valuable) qualities/skills.

You'll basically have to show off your speed , endurance and strength.


You'll bBasically, you have to show off your speed , endurance, and strength.

You'll basicallyBasically, you'll have to show off your speed , endurance and strength.

We have 3 to 4 practices per week, the length of which is 120 minutes, and to put it colloquially we are 'as sweaty as pigs' after them.


We have 3 to 4 practices per week, thefor as leongth of which is 120 minutes, and as 2 hours. After the matter (to put it colloquially) we are '"as sweaty as pigs' after them."

Brackets in English writing are like a separate thought compared to the main sentence. They can be used for jokes or a thought that you want the reader to know you had. For example; "I hate to break it to you (truly I mean no harm), but that dress does not look good on you"

We have 3 to 4 practice sessions per week, the lengteach of which islast for 120 minutes, and to put it colloquially we arbecome 'as sweaty as pigs' after them.

Our coach has had lots of successes to his name, he makes prudent decisions while making his picks for tournaments.


Our coach has had lots of successes toin his name,; he makes prudent decisions while making his picks for tournaments.

Our coach has had lots of successeachievements to his name, he and makes prudent decisions while maken selecting his picks for tournaments.

"selecting" is more specific.

To be selected you must have been efficient in terms of possessions in the last 3 rounds and achieved mastery in one of offensive categories e.g. fast break or basketball cuts.


To be selected, you must have been efficient (in terms of possessions) in the last 3 rounds and have achieved mastery in one ofan offensive categories (e.g. fast break or basketball cuts).

To be selected you must have been be considered "efficient" in terms of possessions in the last 3 rounds and achieved mastery in one of the offensive categories e.g. fast break or basketball cuts.

We (Quicklegs) have won the national title in 2019 and we are second in our city's ratings.


We (Quicklegs) have won the national title in 2019 and we are second in our city's ratings.

Removing the we sounds more natural

As for trainings - any type of athletic attire (loose-fitting shorts and vests) will do, for tournaments we have club uniforms - they consist of a sleeveless jersey featuring the number (back and front) and the last name of the player on the back, shorts and athletic shoes.


As for trainings -, any type of athletic attire (loose-fitting shorts and vests) will do, f. For tournaments we have club uniforms -; they consist of a sleeveless jersey featuring the number (back and front) and the last name of the player on the back,. These are paired with shorts and athletic shoes.

As for the training sessions - any type of athletic attire (loose-fitting shorts and vests) will do, whereas for tournaments, we have club uniforms - they consist of a sleeveless jersey featuring the number (back and front) and the last name of the player on the back, shorts and athletic shoes.

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