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meriem_houda

Oct. 10, 2022

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Guten tag. Ich heiße Meriem. Ich bin 27 Jahre alt. Ich bin eine neue diplomierte Ärztin. Ich habe Deutsch allein gelernt und lerne es weil ich nach Deutschland einwandern möchte.

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Guten tTag.

Ich heiße Meriem.

Ich bin 27 Jahre alt.

Ich bin eine neuegerade erst diplomierte Ärztin.

Use "gerade erst (verb / adjective)" to describe that something just happened. "neu" is used more for new objects, like a new car, a new house, a new friend etc.

Ich hablerne Deutsch allein gelernt und lerne es, weil ich nach Deutschland einauswandern möchte.

"Ich habe Deutsch gelernt" means you are done with and stopped learning German (past tense). Instead, use present tense ("Ich lerne Deutsch") to indicate an ongoing action. Also, "einwandern" isn't necessarily wrong (I'm unsure), but I personally would rather use "auswandern", especially in combination with "nach".

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meriem_houda

Oct. 12, 2022

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Ich hablerne Deutsch allein gelernt und lerne es, weil ich nach Deutschland einauswandern möchte.

Thank you for correcting my text. I just need to know if you're sure. I know that one means comming to the country and the other means leaving from the country, but I don't know which is which. Could you please tell me which one is for sure, I have an exam soon and I can't afford to make a mistake in the introduction (you know the first impression is important 😅)

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meriem_houda

Oct. 12, 2022

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Could you please also correct my other text ,,Gemeinsames Abendessen mit der Familie'' 🙏🙏 Bitte

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whisperofspring

Oct. 12, 2022

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Thank you for correcting my text. I just need to know if you're sure. I know that one means comming to the country and the other means leaving from the country, but I don't know which is which. Could you please tell me which one is for sure, I have an exam soon and I can't afford to make a mistake in the introduction (you know the first impression is important 😅)

Hm... I googled it, and apparently it depends on who's talking. If you move from your home country to Germany, you would use the verb "auswandern", as you are emphasizing that you LEFT your home country. "Einwandern" would then be used by us here in Germany when we talk about you, as we are emphasizing the fact that you moved INTO our country.
So to answer your main question: when introducing yourself and talking about your own move to Germany, use "auswandern". Hope that makes sense.

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meriem_houda

Oct. 13, 2022

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Hm... I googled it, and apparently it depends on who's talking. If you move from your home country to Germany, you would use the verb "auswandern", as you are emphasizing that you LEFT your home country. "Einwandern" would then be used by us here in Germany when we talk about you, as we are emphasizing the fact that you moved INTO our country. So to answer your main question: when introducing yourself and talking about your own move to Germany, use "auswandern". Hope that makes sense.

Haa ok, now I understand thank you.

Ich bin 27 Jahre alt.


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Guten tag.


Guten tTag.

Ich heiße Meriem.


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Ich bin eine neue diplomierte Ärztin.


Ich bin eine neuegerade erst diplomierte Ärztin.

Use "gerade erst (verb / adjective)" to describe that something just happened. "neu" is used more for new objects, like a new car, a new house, a new friend etc.

Ich habe Deutsch allein gelernt und lerne es weil ich nach Deutschland einwandern möchte.


Ich hablerne Deutsch allein gelernt und lerne es, weil ich nach Deutschland einauswandern möchte.

"Ich habe Deutsch gelernt" means you are done with and stopped learning German (past tense). Instead, use present tense ("Ich lerne Deutsch") to indicate an ongoing action. Also, "einwandern" isn't necessarily wrong (I'm unsure), but I personally would rather use "auswandern", especially in combination with "nach".

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