Sept. 4, 2020
Seishun 18 ticket
The Seishun 18 is a 5-days unlimited ticket for local and rapid JR railway throughout Japan from Hokkaido to Kyushu. The price of this ticket is only 2410 yen per day. One person can enjoy Seishun 18 for 5 days, or up to 5 persons can enjoy together! My friend gave me this ticket left 2-days, so I'm going to go to the foot of Mt.Fuji this weekend.
青春18切符とは、北海道から九州までJRの鈍行列車や快速列車に、5日間乗りまくれる切符だ。1日たったの2410円！ひとりで5日間使用することもできるし、最大5人で一緒に使用することもできる。友人が2日分残った青春18切符をくれたので、わたしは今週末に富士山の麓に出かける予定だ。
Seishun 18 ticket
The Seishun 18 is a 5-days ticket for unlimited ticket forrides on local and rapid JR railways throughout Japan from Hokkaido to Kyushu.
The price of this ticket is only 2,410 yen per day.
In English commas go every three numbers (1,000,000,000). Also, using the yen symbol is fine here: "The price of this ticket is only ¥2,410 per day."
One person can enjoyuse a Seishun 18 for 5ticket for five days, or up to 5 personsfive people can enjoy it together for one day!
The other correction was incorrect on this sentence. I'm pretty sure each person using it takes a day off of its use. So if five people use it at once it only lasts for one day.
My friend gave me this ticket left 2-daysone of these tickets with two days remaining, so I'm going to go to the foot of Mt. Fuji this weekend.
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Sept. 4, 2020
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The Seishun 18 is a 5-days unlimited ticket for local and rapid JR railway throughout Japan from Hokkaido to Kyushu. The Seishun 18 is a 5-day |
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The price of this ticket is only 2410 yen per day. The price of this ticket is only 2,410 yen per day. In English commas go every three numbers (1,000,000,000). Also, using the yen symbol is fine here: "The price of this ticket is only ¥2,410 per day." |
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One person can enjoy Seishun 18 for 5 days, or up to 5 persons can enjoy together! One person can The other correction was incorrect on this sentence. I'm pretty sure each person using it takes a day off of its use. So if five people use it at once it only lasts for one day. |
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My friend gave me this ticket left 2-days, so I'm going to go to the foot of Mt.Fuji this weekend. My friend gave me |
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