Jan. 10, 2020
Seeing My Cousin
I drove with my son for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son!
We hadn’t seen each other since last summer, so I was surprised how well her son could speak!
He’s 2 and a half years old, and my son is 4 years old.
They played and laughed together.
We wanted to talk more about our children, daily life, or something funny, but we had to stop talking so often because of our boys.
I thought it was proof I am a mother!
I hope I can see them again soon!
(corrected on Jan. 14th)
私は一時間運転して、可愛いいとこと、その息子に会いに行きました。私たちは去年の夏以来会っていなかったので、その息子が上手に話せるようになっていることにビックリしました！その子は2歳半で、私の息子は4歳です。2人は笑いながら、一緒に遊んでいました。私たちは子どもや日常のこと、面白いことについてもっと話したかったのですが、子どもたちのためにしょっちゅう話をやめなければなりませんでした。これは母親であることの証明だな、と思いました！またすぐに会えますように！
We hadn’t seen each other since last summer, so I was surprised how good the son could speak!.
Jan. 11, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Seeing My Cousin and Her Son
My son and I drove for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son! Her son is 2 and a half years old and mine is 4 years old.
We hadn’t seen each other since last summer, so I was surprised how good ther son could speak!
He’s 2 and a half years old, and my son is 4 years old.
TheyOur sons laughed and played together while laughing.
We wanted to talk more about our children, daily lifeves, or something funny, but we had to stop to talktell funny stories, but we we were interrupted so often because ofy our boys.
I thought it was a proof of being, this is proof that I'm a mother!
I hope Iwe can see them soon agaieach other again soon!
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Jan. 10, 2020
My son and I drove for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son! Her son is 2 and a half years old and mine is 4 years old.
I think "I drove with my son" would be more fitting here.
Jan. 10, 2020
To 426jma,
Thank you so much for the correction!
I learned a lot!
Jan. 10, 2020
To Umaku_naritai,
Oh, thank you for teaching another sentence that would fit more!
Seeing My Cousin
I drove for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son!
We hadn’t seen eachother since last summer, so I was surprised how good twell her son could speak!
He’s 2 and a half years old, and my son is 4 years old.
They played together while laughingand laughed together.
We wanted to talk more about our children, daily life, or something funny, but we had to stop to talking so often because of our boys.
I thought it was a proof of beingI am a mother!
"Proof" only has an indefinite article (a) if it is in mathematics or science.
I hope I can see them soon agaiagain soon!
Jan. 10, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
I didn’t know which to use “how well” or “how good”, so I learned it now!
Jan. 11, 2020
Thank you for the correction! I didn’t know which to use “how well” or “how good”, so I learned it now!
"Good" is used to describe a noun, e.g. "You have a good pen!".
"Well" is used to describe a verb, e.g. "You write well!"
So, if you are complimenting someone's language skills for example, you could say:
"Kyoko writes good English" or "Kyoko writes English well".
Jan. 11, 2020
I really appreciate that you took time for me with example sentences!
I understood it more!
Thank you so much.☺️✨
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I drove for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son! This sentence has been marked as perfect! My son and I drove for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son! Her son is 2 and a half years old and mine is 4 years old. |
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We hadn’t seen since last summer, so I was surprised how good the son could speak! We hadn’t seen eachother since last summer, so I was surprised how We hadn’t seen each other since last summer, so I was surprised how good the son could speak We hadn’t seen each other since last summer, so I was surprised how good |
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He’s 2 and a half years old, and my son is 4 years old. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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They played together while laughing. They played
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We wanted to talk more about our children, daily life, or something funny, but we had to stop to talk so often because of our boys. We wanted to talk more about our children, daily life, or something funny, but we had to stop t We wanted to talk more about our children, daily li |
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I thought it was a proof of being mother! I thought it was "Proof" only has an indefinite article (a) if it is in mathematics or science. I thought |
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I hope I can see them soon again! I hope I can see them I hope |
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I drove with my son for an hour to see my lovely cousin and her little son! |
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We hadn’t seen each other since last summer, so I was surprised how well her son could speak! |
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They played and laughed together. |
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We wanted to talk more about our children, daily life, or something funny, but we had to stop talking so often because of our boys. |
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I thought it was proof I am a mother! |
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I hope I can see them again soon! |
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(corrected on Jan. 15th) |
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