Aug. 25, 2025
My vision always been god but until a while it has been blurryly with the characteres of the computer.
I work with programming so I belive that fact of I spend all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can be harmin my vision.
I Probably i need wear glasses.
Minha visão sempre foi muito boa, mas a algum tempo ela tem ficado um pouco embaçada com as letras pequenas do computador.
Eu trabalho com programação então acredito que o fato de eu ficar o dia todo olhando para a tela do computador manipulando variáveis possa estar prejudicando minha visão.
Provavelmente vou precisar usar óculos
My vision always been godod, but until a whilerecently it has been blurryly with the charactere when I look at words ofn the computer.
"good" instead of "god"
When you say characters, I assume you mean text, as in the letters on your screen. That makes sense, but saying "words" or "text" might be a bit clearer
I work with programming, so I believe that fact of I spending all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can beat a computer screen is what is harming my vision.
Could also be written as "I am a programmer, so I spend all day looking at a computer screen. I believe this is what is might be harming my vision."
I just edited it to be more clear, but the original sentence will still be understood.
I Pprobably i need to wear glasses.
"probably" isn't the beginning of the sentence, so it doesn't need to be capitalised. When using "I" as a pronoun, it should be capitalised.
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Very good!! I understood what you were saying. Most corrections are just for clarity. Also, I have the same problem. I neglect to wear my glasses...
Seeing Blurryily.
No period needed here in the title.
Alternative since "blurrily" is a word that's awkward to pronounce and would mostly be avoided: Blurry Vision
My vision has always been godod, but until a whilelately it has been blurryly with the characteres, specifically when looking at text ofn the computer.
I work within programming, so I believe thate fact ofthat I spend all day looking for screens of computer,at computer screens and manipulating variables can cause me to lose my vision canor may be harming my vision.
Looking for = searching for
I Pprobably i need (to wear) glasses.
The part in parentheses is optional
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Great job.
It sounds like you should see an ophthalmologist!
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Seeing Blurryly. Seeing Blurr No period needed here in the title. Alternative since "blurrily" is a word that's awkward to pronounce and would mostly be avoided: Blurry Vision |
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My vision always been god but until a while it has been blurryly with the characteres of the computer. My vision has always been go My vision always been go "good" instead of "god" When you say characters, I assume you mean text, as in the letters on your screen. That makes sense, but saying "words" or "text" might be a bit clearer |
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I work with programming so I belive that fact of I spend all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can be harmin my vision. I work Looking for = searching for I work with programming, so I believe that Could also be written as "I am a programmer, so I spend all day looking at a computer screen. I believe this is what is might be harming my vision." I just edited it to be more clear, but the original sentence will still be understood. |
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I Probably i need wear glasses. I The part in parentheses is optional I "probably" isn't the beginning of the sentence, so it doesn't need to be capitalised. When using "I" as a pronoun, it should be capitalised. |
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