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Lucas_lab2

Aug. 25, 2025

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Seeing Blurryly.

My vision always been god but until a while it has been blurryly with the characteres of the computer.
I work with programming so I belive that fact of I spend all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can be harmin my vision.
I Probably i need wear glasses.


Minha visão sempre foi muito boa, mas a algum tempo ela tem ficado um pouco embaçada com as letras pequenas do computador.
Eu trabalho com programação então acredito que o fato de eu ficar o dia todo olhando para a tela do computador manipulando variáveis possa estar prejudicando minha visão.
Provavelmente vou precisar usar óculos

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My vision always been godod, but until a whilerecently it has been blurryly with the charactere when I look at words ofn the computer.

"good" instead of "god"



When you say characters, I assume you mean text, as in the letters on your screen. That makes sense, but saying "words" or "text" might be a bit clearer

I work with programming, so I believe that fact of I spending all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can beat a computer screen is what is harming my vision.

Could also be written as "I am a programmer, so I spend all day looking at a computer screen. I believe this is what is might be harming my vision."

I just edited it to be more clear, but the original sentence will still be understood.

I Pprobably i need to wear glasses.

"probably" isn't the beginning of the sentence, so it doesn't need to be capitalised. When using "I" as a pronoun, it should be capitalised.

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Very good!! I understood what you were saying. Most corrections are just for clarity. Also, I have the same problem. I neglect to wear my glasses...

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Lucas_lab2

Aug. 26, 2025

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Thank you

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Lucas_lab2

Aug. 26, 2025

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wear glasses with a blue light filter

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Kaleidozone

Aug. 27, 2025

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You're welcome!

Seeing Blurryily.

No period needed here in the title.

Alternative since "blurrily" is a word that's awkward to pronounce and would mostly be avoided: Blurry Vision

My vision has always been godod, but until a whilelately it has been blurryly with the characteres, specifically when looking at text ofn the computer.

I work within programming, so I believe thate fact ofthat I spend all day looking for screens of computer,at computer screens and manipulating variables can cause me to lose my vision canor may be harming my vision.

Looking for = searching for

I Pprobably i need (to wear) glasses.

The part in parentheses is optional

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Great job.
It sounds like you should see an ophthalmologist!

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Lucas_lab2

Aug. 26, 2025

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yes, I visit the ophthamologist and he prescribed me galsses with ligth blue filter.

Seeing Blurryly.


Seeing Blurryily.

No period needed here in the title. Alternative since "blurrily" is a word that's awkward to pronounce and would mostly be avoided: Blurry Vision

My vision always been god but until a while it has been blurryly with the characteres of the computer.


My vision has always been godod, but until a whilelately it has been blurryly with the characteres, specifically when looking at text ofn the computer.

My vision always been godod, but until a whilerecently it has been blurryly with the charactere when I look at words ofn the computer.

"good" instead of "god" When you say characters, I assume you mean text, as in the letters on your screen. That makes sense, but saying "words" or "text" might be a bit clearer

I work with programming so I belive that fact of I spend all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can be harmin my vision.


I work within programming, so I believe thate fact ofthat I spend all day looking for screens of computer,at computer screens and manipulating variables can cause me to lose my vision canor may be harming my vision.

Looking for = searching for

I work with programming, so I believe that fact of I spending all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can beat a computer screen is what is harming my vision.

Could also be written as "I am a programmer, so I spend all day looking at a computer screen. I believe this is what is might be harming my vision." I just edited it to be more clear, but the original sentence will still be understood.

I Probably i need wear glasses.


I Pprobably i need (to wear) glasses.

The part in parentheses is optional

I Pprobably i need to wear glasses.

"probably" isn't the beginning of the sentence, so it doesn't need to be capitalised. When using "I" as a pronoun, it should be capitalised.

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