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alexwong2164

May 27, 2023

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Living with my sister

After my mother passed away last year.

My sister suggest that we may live together.

She got a house with an extra room.

I can come here anytime I want.

That is a very good idea.

If I live with her 7/24 small problem can turn to large problem.

Now, I usually come to her house once a week.

Most of the time I just sleep there or sometime have dinner with her.

Today she is going out for a full day’s work.

I am taking the opportunity to use the house for my own interest.

Want to come visit me?

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see u later

Unless this is in a casual text to a friend, it's not common to write "u" in place of "you".

LivingI lived with my sister

A
after my mother passed away last year.

My sister suggested that we may live together.

past tense: add 'ed' to suggest

She gothad a house with an extra room.

If she owned it for awhile, you would say "had". If she just purchased the house, you can keep "got".

I can come herevisit anytime I want.

That is a very good idea.

If I live with her 7/24/7, small problems can turn to larger problems.

Now, I usually come to her house once a week.

Most of the time I just sleep there or sometimes have dinner with her.

Today she is going out for a full day’s work.

I am taking the opportunity to use the house for my own interest.

LI am living with my sister

A
after my mother passed away last year.

My sister suggested that we may live together.

That is a veryI thought this was a good idea.

IHowever, if I live with her 7/24/7, small problems can easily turn into larbigger problems.

NowBecause of this, I usually come toonly visit her house once a week.

Most of the time I just sleep there or sometimes have dinner with her.

I am taking the opportunity to use the house for my own interestself.

see u later


see u later

Unless this is in a casual text to a friend, it's not common to write "u" in place of "you".

Living with my sister After my mother passed away last year.


LI am living with my sister

A
after my mother passed away last year.

LivingI lived with my sister

A
after my mother passed away last year.

My sister suggest that we may live together.


My sister suggested that we may live together.

My sister suggested that we may live together.

past tense: add 'ed' to suggest

She got a house with an extra room.


She gothad a house with an extra room.

If she owned it for awhile, you would say "had". If she just purchased the house, you can keep "got".

I can come here anytime I want.


I can come herevisit anytime I want.

That is a very good idea.


That is a veryI thought this was a good idea.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I live with her 7/24 small problem can turn to large problem.


IHowever, if I live with her 7/24/7, small problems can easily turn into larbigger problems.

If I live with her 7/24/7, small problems can turn to larger problems.

Now, I usually come to her house once a week.


NowBecause of this, I usually come toonly visit her house once a week.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Most of the time I just sleep there or sometime have dinner with her.


Most of the time I just sleep there or sometimes have dinner with her.

Most of the time I just sleep there or sometimes have dinner with her.

Today she is going out for a full day’s work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am taking the opportunity to use the house for my own interest.


I am taking the opportunity to use the house for my own interestself.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Want to come visit me?


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