Dec. 9, 2020
Journal 12/09/20
The civil servant’s salary in Hangzhou is really high. My niece as a new enrolled civil servant got her first month's salary: it is 10 thousand yuan. According to her, she is on probation. After becoming a full member, she can get a salary of 12 to 13 thousand yuan, and the money paid less during the probation period will be made up. I have worked for 36 years, but my salary is just 4.6 thousand yuan every month now. The development of regional economics is too different and the huge differences shocked me a lot.
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The salary of a civil servant’s salary in Hangzhou is really high.
The salary of a civil servant in Hangzhou is really high.
You can also say: "A civil servant's salary in Hangzhou is really high." But to say: "The civil servant's salary" sounds unnatural because there is not only one civil servant.
My niece a, who is a new enrolled civil servant, just got her first month's salary:; it is 10 thousand yuan.
My niece, who is a new enrolled civil servant, just got her first month's salary; it is 10 thousand yuan.
After becoming a full member, she can get a salary of 12 to 13 thousand yuan, and the money paid lessshe wasn't paid during the probation period will be made up.
After becoming a full member, she can get a salary of 12 to 13 thousand yuan, and the money she wasn't paid during the probation period will be made up.
The development of regional economices is toovery different and the huge differences shocked me a lot.
The development of regional economies is very different and the huge differences shocked me a lot.
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Dec. 10, 2020
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Journal 12/09/20 |
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The civil servant’s salary in Hangzhou is really high.
The salary of a civil servant You can also say: "A civil servant's salary in Hangzhou is really high." But to say: "The civil servant's salary" sounds unnatural because there is not only one civil servant. |
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My niece as a new enrolled civil servant got her first month's salary: it is 10 thousand yuan.
My niece |
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According to her, she is on probation. |
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After becoming a full member, she can get a salary of 12 to 13 thousand yuan, and the money paid less during the probation period will be made up.
After becoming a full member, she can get a salary of 12 to 13 thousand yuan, and the money |
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I have worked for 36 years, but my salary is just 4.6 thousand yuan every month now. |
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The development of regional economics is too different and the huge differences shocked me a lot.
The development of regional economi |
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