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”Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown

At a bookstore, I happened to pick up a novel from the new releases section. It was ”The Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown.
The book comes in two thick volumes, but what really caught my attention was that it is set in Prague where I’m deeply interested in.
However, each volume is very expensive. We’ve entered an age when you can’t easily buy books anymore. Still, I feel a strong urge to read it.


本屋の新刊コーナーでたまたま手に取った小説。ダンブラウンの「シークレット・オブ・シークレッツ」。上下二巻の分厚い本だが、私が興味を持つプラハが舞台となっているではないか。しかし、一冊が非常に高い。簡単に本が買えない時代になってしまった。でも読みたい衝動に駆られている。

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”Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown

At aLSO POSSIBLE: Recently at a local bookstore, I happened to picked up a novel from theits new releases section.

NOTE: The original is also possible.

SMOOTHER: The book comes in two thick volumes, but and what really caught my attentioneye was that it iwas set in Prague where-- a city I’m deeply interested in.

HoweverRegrettably, each volume is very expensive.

WIt seems we’ve entered an age when youmany Japanese can’t easily buy books anymore.

Still, I feel a strong urge to read it.

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提案:日本には素晴らしい公共図書館システムがあります。 地元の図書館に、その本のコピーを買ってもらうのはどうですか?
SUGGESTION: Japan has an excellent public library system. Why not ask your local library to buy a copy of the book?

”Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown

At a bookstore, I happened to pick up a novel from the new releases section.

It was ”The Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown.

The book comes in two thick volumes, but what really caught my attention was that it is set in Prague, whereich I’m deeply interested in.

or, "a place I'm deeply interested in"

However, each volume is very expensive.

We’ve entered an age whenre you can’t easily buy books anymore.

Still, I feel a strong urge to read it.

Ok, but I think "Still, I've got a strong urge to read it" or "Still, I have a strong urge to read it" sound less literary and serious

”Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown

At a bookstore, I happened to pick up a novel from the new releases section.

It was ”The Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown.

The book comes in two thick volumes, but what really caught my attention was that it is set in Prague where I’m deeply interested in.

or, more naturally: "...set in Prague, a place I'm deeply interested in."

However, each volume is very expensive.

We’ve entered an age when you can’t easily buy books anymore.

Still, I feel a strong urge to read it.

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Well done!

”Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown


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At a bookstore, I happened to pick up a novel from the new releases section.


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At aLSO POSSIBLE: Recently at a local bookstore, I happened to picked up a novel from theits new releases section.

NOTE: The original is also possible.

It was ”The Secret of Secrets” by Dan Brown.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The book comes in two thick volumes, but what really caught my attention was that it is set in Prague where I’m deeply interested in.


The book comes in two thick volumes, but what really caught my attention was that it is set in Prague where I’m deeply interested in.

or, more naturally: "...set in Prague, a place I'm deeply interested in."

The book comes in two thick volumes, but what really caught my attention was that it is set in Prague, whereich I’m deeply interested in.

or, "a place I'm deeply interested in"

SMOOTHER: The book comes in two thick volumes, but and what really caught my attentioneye was that it iwas set in Prague where-- a city I’m deeply interested in.

However, each volume is very expensive.


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HoweverRegrettably, each volume is very expensive.

We’ve entered an age when you can’t easily buy books anymore.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We’ve entered an age whenre you can’t easily buy books anymore.

WIt seems we’ve entered an age when youmany Japanese can’t easily buy books anymore.

Still, I feel a strong urge to read it.


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Still, I feel a strong urge to read it.

Ok, but I think "Still, I've got a strong urge to read it" or "Still, I have a strong urge to read it" sound less literary and serious

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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