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In this note I want to tell something interesting what I watched earlier. It's "Imperia without automobiles". It's a documental serial, where author told about 20 century.
But I don't know where I should start.
In russian school my teacher very bad teach us about 20 century, and like most of children in our class, I wasn't mind. But after years I found this serial, and now I understand, why our teacher and we very briefly lern those thems.
Theme of "First World War" was very briefly and last thing I remember about this conflict "Russian exited from the War". Now I now the truth. What do you think about "exited from War" during "First World War"? In school I dont understand it, because I didn't ask my teacher about this. Just imagine, you have a loaded gun at your head, and after this you say: "I don't want to fight, I go out, bye! :3". Ridiculous. My ancestry lost war. But why? Because we had a civil war at this time? Ok, but why in this time? Why we needed a revolution at the same time "Firs World War"? A lot of questions, if you feel same, just watch "Imperia without automobiles", right now there is 5 series, and maybe will 6 series.
This serial on youtube and on russian language, but I watched with auto-translator on English and I dont had any problems to understand. ))))

В этой заметке я хочу рассказать кое-что интересное из того, что я смотрел ранее. Это "Империя без автомобилей". Это документальный сериал, где автор рассказывает о 20 веке.
Но я не знаю, с чего мне начать.
В русской школе моя учительница очень плохо рассказывала нам о 20 веке, и, как и большинство детей в нашем классе, я была не против. Но спустя годы я нашла этот сериал и теперь понимаю, почему мы с нашей учительницей так недолго изучали его.
Тема "Первой мировой войны" была очень короткой, и последнее, что я помню об этом конфликте, - "Русские вышли из войны". Теперь я расскажу правду. Что вы думаете о "выходе из войны" во время "Первой мировой войны"? В школе я этого не понимал, потому что не спрашивал об этом своего учителя. Только представьте, вам приставляют заряженный пистолет к виску, и после этого вы говорите: "Я не хочу драться, я ухожу, пока!" :3". Нелепый. Мои предки проиграли войну. Но почему? Потому что в это время у нас была гражданская война? Хорошо, но почему именно в это время? Почему нам нужна была революция одновременно с "Первой мировой войной"? Много вопросов, если вы чувствуете то же самое, просто посмотрите "Империю без автомобилей", сейчас идет 5 серия, а может быть, будет и 6 серия.
Этот сериал на youtube и на русском языке, но я смотрел с автоматическим переводчиком на английский, и у меня не было проблем с пониманием. ))))

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In this note I want to tellalk about something interesting wthat I watched earlier.

When making a relative clause / including extra info, start with "that" (not "what")

e.g:

"The movie that I watched" ✅
"The movie what I watched" ❌

It's "IEmperia wire Without aAutomobiles".

Is Imperia a name? Империя in Russian is "empire" in English :)

It's a documentalry serial, where author told aboutes, in which the author describes the 20th century.

But I don't know where I should start from.

In rRussian school, my teacher is very bad at teaching us about 20the 20th century, and like most of children in our class, I wasdidn't mindcare for it.

I didn't mind = I wasn't bothered = It wasn't bad to me

But aftermany years later, I found this seriales, and now I understand, why our teacher and we very briefly lerntaught us those themopics.

1) This phrasing is more common for a learning in a class.
2) "Theme / thema / them" in many European languages is "topic" in English :)

Theme of " topic of the First World War" was very briefly and the last thing I remember about this conflict was that "Russian exited from the War".

What do you think about "exited from Wthis idea of Russia "exiting the war" during "First World War"?

Just saying "Russian exiting the First World War" is also fine, or even better.

IBack in school, I donidn't understand it, because I didn't ask my teacher about this.

You're using "in" to mean "during an earlier time", so saying "back in ..." flows better.

Just imagine, you have a loaded gun ato your head, and aftereven thisen you say: "I don't want to fight, I go ouquit, bye! :3".

1) A gun is held *to* someone's head.
2) "go out" doesn't really work here - if you meant "exit", it feels a little wrong with the sentence you're trying to make.

Ridiculous.

My ancestryors lost the war.

But why?

Because we had a civil war at this time?

Ok, but why inat this time?

Why did we needed a revolution at the same time as the "First World War"?

When making questions, use "do/did":

e.g:

Did we need to ...
Do you want to ...

NOT

Did we needed to ... ❌
Did you wanted to ... ❌

AI have a lot of questions, and if you feel same, just watch "IEmperia wire Without aAutomobiles", r. Right now there is 5 seriare 5 episodes, and there may be will 6 seriesa 6th episode too.

серия is "episode" :)

This seriales is on yYoutTube and oin rthe Russian language, but I watched with auto-translator on in English and I donidn't hadve any problems to understanding it.

:))))

In Cyrillic languages, usually the "smiley face" is written without the colon / eyes, but in most other languages it's needed :) (haha)

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Interesting writing and difficult choice of topic! You handled it well!

Personally, I had some interest in European history, and I think the people were dissatisfied since a long time and the war finally made them so sick, and the government so weak, that a revolution became possible. That's just my understanding though :p

Good job! <3

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In this note I want to tell something interesting what I watched earlier.

In this note I want to tellalk about something interesting wthat I watched earlier.

When making a relative clause / including extra info, start with "that" (not "what") e.g: "The movie that I watched" ✅ "The movie what I watched" ❌

It's "Imperia without automobiles".

It's "IEmperia wire Without aAutomobiles".

Is Imperia a name? Империя in Russian is "empire" in English :)

It's a documental serial, where author told about 20 century.

It's a documentalry serial, where author told aboutes, in which the author describes the 20th century.

But I don't know where I should start.

But I don't know where I should start from.

In russian school my teacher very bad teach us about 20 century, and like most of children in our class, I wasn't mind.

In rRussian school, my teacher is very bad at teaching us about 20the 20th century, and like most of children in our class, I wasdidn't mindcare for it.

I didn't mind = I wasn't bothered = It wasn't bad to me

But after years I found this serial, and now I understand, why our teacher and we very briefly lern those thems.

But aftermany years later, I found this seriales, and now I understand, why our teacher and we very briefly lerntaught us those themopics.

1) This phrasing is more common for a learning in a class. 2) "Theme / thema / them" in many European languages is "topic" in English :)

Theme of "First World War" was very briefly and last thing I remember about this conflict "Russian exited from the War".

Theme of " topic of the First World War" was very briefly and the last thing I remember about this conflict was that "Russian exited from the War".

Now I now the truth.

What do you think about "exited from War" during "First World War"?

What do you think about "exited from Wthis idea of Russia "exiting the war" during "First World War"?

Just saying "Russian exiting the First World War" is also fine, or even better.

In school I dont understand it, because I didn't ask my teacher about this.

IBack in school, I donidn't understand it, because I didn't ask my teacher about this.

You're using "in" to mean "during an earlier time", so saying "back in ..." flows better.

Just imagine, you have a loaded gun at your head, and after this you say: "I don't want to fight, I go out, bye! :3".

Just imagine, you have a loaded gun ato your head, and aftereven thisen you say: "I don't want to fight, I go ouquit, bye! :3".

1) A gun is held *to* someone's head. 2) "go out" doesn't really work here - if you meant "exit", it feels a little wrong with the sentence you're trying to make.

Ridiculous.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My ancestry lost war.

My ancestryors lost the war.

But why?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because we had a civil war at this time?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Ok, but why in this time?

Ok, but why inat this time?

Why we needed a revolution at the same time "Firs World War"?

Why did we needed a revolution at the same time as the "First World War"?

When making questions, use "do/did": e.g: Did we need to ... Do you want to ... NOT Did we needed to ... ❌ Did you wanted to ... ❌

A lot of questions, if you feel same, just watch "Imperia without automobiles", right now there is 5 series, and maybe will 6 series.

AI have a lot of questions, and if you feel same, just watch "IEmperia wire Without aAutomobiles", r. Right now there is 5 seriare 5 episodes, and there may be will 6 seriesa 6th episode too.

серия is "episode" :)

This serial on youtube and on russian language, but I watched with auto-translator on English and I dont had any problems to understand.

This seriales is on yYoutTube and oin rthe Russian language, but I watched with auto-translator on in English and I donidn't hadve any problems to understanding it.

))))

:))))

In Cyrillic languages, usually the "smiley face" is written without the colon / eyes, but in most other languages it's needed :) (haha)

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