June 27, 2025
Second Day
Today was my second day of training at the gift shop. It had been a week since my first one. I only worked for four hours, but once I got home, I didn’t feel like doing anything. I should have reviewed the diary I wrote yesterday. If this goes on like this, my English won’t improve.
Today’s diary is a bit short, but I’m getting sleepy.
今日はお土産屋さんでの研修の2日目だった。1週間ぶりの研修だった。4時間しか働いていないのに、家に帰ると何もする気力がない。昨日書いた日記の復習をするべきだったのに。このままでは英語が上達しない。
今日の日記は少し短いですが、眠くなってきました。
Second Day
Today was my second day of training at the gift shop.
It had been a week since my first one.
I only worked for four hours, but once I got home, I didn’t feel like doing anything.
I should have reviewed the diary I wrote yesterday.
If this goes on like this, my English won’t improve.
Today’s diary is a bit short, but I’m getting sleepy.
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Perfectly comprehensible to me! Keep studying!
It hads been a week since my first one.
I only worked for four hours, but once I got home, I didn’t feel like doing anything.
If this goes on like this, my English won’t improve.
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Amazing job - only one small tense error with "had" and "has". "Had" being wrong due to being in the past tense but "has" is in the present tense.
Second Day
Today was my second day of training at the gift shop.
It hads been a week since my first one.
"It had" is grammatically correct, but it refers to two events that both happened in the past, whereas "It has" links one event from the past to now. Because you are talking about today being your second day of training (now) and your first day was one week ago (in the past), I think it's more natural to use "it has".
I only worked for four hours, but once I got home, I didn’t feel like doing anything.
I should have reviewed the diary entry I wrote yesterday.
"Diary" refers to the whole collection of writings, while "diary entry" refers to the individual days.
If ithis goes on like this, my English won’t improve.
I feel like it is more natural to use 'it'
Today’s diary entry is a bit short, but I’m getting sleepy.
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It had been a week since my first one. It ha "It had" is grammatically correct, but it refers to two events that both happened in the past, whereas "It has" links one event from the past to now. Because you are talking about today being your second day of training (now) and your first day was one week ago (in the past), I think it's more natural to use "it has". It ha This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I should have reviewed the diary I wrote yesterday. I should have reviewed the diary entry I wrote yesterday. "Diary" refers to the whole collection of writings, while "diary entry" refers to the individual days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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