Dec. 16, 2022
Second Day
This is my second journal. I have been busy these months so I couldn't come back and continue where I left this off...
I went to Barcelona to visit a friend of mine who recently moved there. I then came back to the UK, and get are having one of the coldest winters I can remember. Temperatures have been below zero for most of the week, and we have reached -10 degrees for some days... it's been tough. At least, I have started my holidays, and I will not come back to work until January.
Yesterday I also had my company's End-of-the-Year party. It was really fun, and when I came back home it started to snow, which made it feel unforgettable.
I have been a bit down lately. I want to start going to the gym once again, hopefully by January.
That's me for today's journal. I'll appreciate any corrections/suggestions!
This is my second journal entry.
I have been busy these months so I couldn't come back and continue where I left this off...
I went to Barcelona to visit a friend of mine who recently moved there.
I then came back to the UK, and getwe are having one of the coldest winters I can remember.
Temperatures have been below zero for most of the week, and we have reached -10 degrees for some days... it's been tough.
It was really fun, and when I came back home it started to snow, which made it feel unforgettable.
This is optional, it just feels more natural to hear this without ‘feel’. However, I am an American, so it may be different in the UK!
I have been a bit down lately.
That's meit for today's journal.
I'll would appreciate any corrections/suggestions!
Feedback
I hope you can get back to the gym, I find it always helps my mood, especially during winter!
I have been busy thesefor a few months so I couldn't come back and continue where I left this off...
I then came back to the UK, and getthey are having one of the coldest winters I can remember.
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This is my second journal. This is my second journal entry. |
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I have been busy these months so I couldn't come back and continue where I left this off... I have been busy I have been busy these months so I couldn't come back and continue where I left |
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I went to Barcelona to visit a friend of mine who recently moved there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I then came back to the UK, and get are having one of the coldest winters I can remember. I then came back to the UK, and I then came back to the UK, and |
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Temperatures have been below zero for most of the week, and we have reached -10 degrees for some days... it's been tough. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At least, I have started my holidays, and I will not come back to work until January. |
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Yesterday I also had my company's End-of-the-Year party. |
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It was really fun, and when I came back home it started to snow, which made it feel unforgettable. It was really fun, and when I came back home it started to snow, which made it This is optional, it just feels more natural to hear this without ‘feel’. However, I am an American, so it may be different in the UK! |
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I have been a bit down lately. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to start going to the gym once again, hopefully by January. |
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That's me for today's journal. That's |
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I'll appreciate any corrections/suggestions! I |
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