Oct. 14, 2021
Seasons of Korea
In Korea, there are four seasons like other counties; spring, summer, fall and winter.
In spring, the weather is warm and nice.
The blooming flowers are so beautiful, so many people watch them.
However, yellow dust from deserts of China and Mongolia where are more than 1000km from Korea make us wear masks.
On the other hand, it is humid in summer because of monsoon period.
After the monsoon, temperature is more than 35 Celsious.
So many people go traveling to sea, mountain streams or swimming pool near their houses.
In the fall, it is cool and nice.
The sky is really clear that it shows true blue color.
People like this season very much.
But we need to be extra careful when many typhoons come.
Last, it is too cold in winter.
The temperator is less than -10 degree Celsious.
There are many snows as well.
Children like this season as they can play with snow.
So, there are four distinct seasons in Korea.
Seasons of Korea
In Korea, there are four seasons like other countries; spring, summer, fall and winter.
forgot the "r" in countries
In spring, the weather is warm and nice.
The blooming flowers are so beautiful, so many people watchlook at them.
"watch" isn't necessarily incorrect, but people in English never really say you "watch" the flowers, we would say you "look at" the flowers.
However, yellow dust from the deserts of China and Mongolia where are more thanthat are over 1000km away from Korea make us wear masks.
On the other hand, it is humid in summer because of the monsoon period.
After the monsoon, the temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsious.
So many people go traveling to the sea, the mountain streams or the swimming pools near their houses.
In the fall, it is cool and nice.
The sky is really clear thatand it shows a true blue color.
People like this season very much.
But we need to be extra careful whenbecause many typhoons come in the fall.
Last, it is too cold in winter.
The temperatorure is less than -10 degrees Celsious.
There are many snowsIt snows a lot as well.
Children like this season asbecause they can play win the snow.
So, there are four distinct seasons in Korea.
Feedback
Your English is very good. Just a couple of minor spelling errors and forgetting to use "the". Good job!
Oct. 28, 2021
Thank you so much. I will keep your advice when writing sentences.
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Seasons of Korea This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Spring, warm nice |
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Yellow dust from desert of China and mongol, more than 1000km |
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Summer humid because monsoon period. |
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After the monsoon, temperature is more than 35 |
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Go traveling to sea, mountain streams or swimming pool near their houses |
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In fall, cool and nice. |
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Sky is real clear that it shows true blue color. |
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People like this season very much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But we need to care about many typhoons. |
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Last, it is too cold in winter |
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Less than -10 degree |
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Many snow too |
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Children like this season as they can play with snow. Children like this season |
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In Korea, there are four seasons like other counties; spring, summer, fall and winter. In Korea, there are four seasons like other countries; spring, summer, fall and winter. forgot the "r" in countries |
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In spring, the weather is warm and nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The blooming flowers are so beautiful, so many people watch them. The blooming flowers are so beautiful, so many people "watch" isn't necessarily incorrect, but people in English never really say you "watch" the flowers, we would say you "look at" the flowers. |
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However, yellow dust from deserts of China and Mongolia where are more than 1000km from Korea make us wear masks. However, yellow dust from the deserts of China and Mongolia |
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On the other hand, it is humid in summer because of monsoon period. On the other hand, it is humid in summer because of the monsoon period. |
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After the monsoon, temperature is more than 35 Celsious. After the monsoon, the temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsi |
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So many people go traveling to sea, mountain streams or swimming pool near their houses. So many people go traveling to the sea, the mountain streams or the swimming pools near their houses. |
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In the fall, it is cool and nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The sky is really clear that it shows true blue color. The sky is really clear |
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But we need to be extra careful when many typhoons come. But we need to be extra careful |
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Last, it is too cold in winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The temperator is less than -10 degree Celsious. The temperat |
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There are many snows as well.
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So, there are four distinct seasons in Korea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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