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23/05 Internet social media : another opinion essay :)

With the increasing use of technology and the internet, more people are engaging with social media apps and platforms. For that, some people think that social media is bad for society because people use it too much. Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are overall good.

To begin, internet social media have created more opportunities to earn extra money. Nowadays, with the visualization of platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are getting extra profits by attracting audience and new customers. For instance, my mother, who is a CEO of a small crochet business, have doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily in her Instagram account.

Additionally, people can get value skills by creating content for social media. With these platforms becoming more popular, knowing how to make videos and nice looking content is a very sought after skill. On the other hand, some others think that it creates addiction and therefore social media is a bad thing for society. However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling the time scrolling and set a specific time to do use these applications.

In conclusion, I think that social media have created more economic opportunities for smalls business and ordinary people, and also have made people getting value skills. Although there are some risk to consider related to the addition of its use, I tend to believe that there are ways to control its excessive usage.

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23/05 Internet social media : another opinion essay :)

With the increasing use of technology and the internet, more people are engaging with social media apps and platforms.

With these platforms becoming more popular, knowing how to make videos and nice looking content is a very sought after skill.

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With the increasing use of technology and the internet, more people are engaging with social media apps and platforms.

23/05 Internet social media : another opinion essay :)


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With the increasing use of technology and the internet, more people are engaging with social media apps and platforms.


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For that, some people think that social media is bad for society because people use it too much.


For that, sSome people think that social media is bad for society because people use it too much. Some people think that social media is bad for society because people use it too much.

ForBecause of that, some people think that social media is bad for society because people use it too much. Because of that, some people think that social media is bad for society because people use it too much.

Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are overall good.


Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are good overall good. Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are good overall.

Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are overall goodbeneficial. Although I do not underestimate the risk of social media addiction, I believe that these platforms are overall beneficial.

You could also use "beneficial" here in place of "good" to make it more academic sounding.

Additionally, people can get value skills by creating content for social media.


Additionally, people can getain valuable skills by creating content for social media. Additionally, people can gain valuable skills by creating content for social media.

Additionally, people can get valuable skills by creating content for social media. Additionally, people can get valuable skills by creating content for social media.

To begin, internet social media have created more opportunities to earn extra money.


To begin, internet social media haves created more opportunities to earn extra money. To begin, social media has created more opportunities to earn extra money.

To begin, internetsocial media has created more opportunities to earn extra money. //OR// To begin, the internet and social media have created more opportunities to earn extra money. To begin, social media has created more opportunities to earn extra money. //OR// To begin, the internet and social media have created more opportunities to earn extra money.

Are you talking about the internet and social media or just social media? I gave two options depending on which one you want to use.

Nowadays, with the visualization of platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are getting extra profits by attracting audience and new customers.


Nowadays, with the visualization of platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are getting extra profitsing by attracting audiences and new customers. Nowadays, with the visualization of platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are profiting by attracting audiences and new customers.

Nowadays, with the visualization of platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are getting extra profits by attracting audience and new customers. Nowadays, with platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, small companies and ordinary people are getting extra profits by attracting audience and new customers.

It is more clear this way.

For instance, my mother, who is a CEO of a small crochet business, have doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily in her Instagram account.


For instance, my mother, who is athe CEO of a small crochet business, haves doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily ion her Instagram account. For instance, my mother, who is the CEO of a small crochet business, has doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily on her Instagram account.

For instance, my mother, who is athe CEO of a small crochet business, haves doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily ion her Instagram account. For instance, my mother, who is the CEO of a small crochet business, has doubled her monthly revenue by posting daily on her Instagram account.

There is usually only one CEO of a business, so it would be ''the" instead of "a", "has" because we are talking about your mother. In English you "post on social media" or "post on the internet"

With these platforms becoming more popular, knowing how to make videos and nice looking content is a very sought after skill.


With these platforms becoming more popular, knowing how to make videos and nice lookappealing content is a very sought after skill. With these platforms becoming more popular, knowing how to make videos and appealing content is a very sought after skill.

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On the other hand, some others think that it creates addiction and therefore social media is a bad thing for society.


On the other hand, some others think that it creates's very addictionve and therefore social media is a bad thingbad for society. On the other hand, some others think that it's very addictive and therefore bad for society.

On the other hand, some otherspeople think that it creates addiction and therefore social media is a bad thing for society. On the other hand, some people think that it creates addiction and therefore social media is a bad thing for society.

However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling the time scrolling and set a specific time to do use these applications.


However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling the time scrolling and setting a specific time to do useduration when using these applications. However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling the time scrolling and setting a specific time duration when using these apps.

However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling the time scrolling and settime by setting a specific time to do use these applications. However, there are many ways to reduce that risk, such as controlling scrolling time by setting a specific time to use these applications.

setting a specific time is a way to control the time you spend scrolling

In conclusion, I think that social media have created more economic opportunities for smalls business and ordinary people, and also have made people getting value skills.


In conclusion, I think that social media haves created more economic opportunities for smalls businesses and ordinary people, and also haves made people gettaing valuable skills. In conclusion, I think that social media has created more economic opportunities for small businesses and ordinary people, and also has made people gain valuable skills.

In conclusion, I think that social media haves created more economic opportunities for smalls business and ordinary people, and also have madetaught people getting valuable skills. In conclusion, I think that social media has created more economic opportunities for smalls business and ordinary people, and also have taught people valuable skills.

social media is singular

Although there are some risk to consider related to the addition of its use, I tend to believe that there are ways to control its excessive usage.


Although there are some risks to consider related to the addition of its use, I tend to believe that there are ways to control its excessive usage. Although there are some risks to consider related to its use, I tend to believe that there are ways to control its excessive usage.

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