June 21, 2021
Scientist
As the day of elementary school graduation was approaching, students were required to write what they want to grow up to be on the graduation essay. I had desired to become a scientist in the future even though what I imagined was stereotype and vague. I was so curios about science as to buy a chemistry textbook for high school students and make it a habit of reading it. The feeling of sorrow or anxiety had never come to my mind at the graduation because I can't wait the time to learn more complicated contents of sciences and mathematics at middle or high school.
However, it became boring when I studied hard to pass the university entrance exams. Physics theories and math formulas which I had to learn sounded like spells. At that time, I happened to find the words of Richard Feynman, one of the most popular and talented physicists in the 20th century, in the textbook. One of his famous quotes about "what is the only one sentence should be passed on to the next generation of creatures if all of scientific knowledge were to be destroyed" remained me of the day I was really into science. Eventually, I got a master degree of medical engineering and found a R&D research job. I'm not sure if my dream has come true, but my interests in science stay alive.
Scientist
As the day of elementary school graduation was approaching, students were required to write what they want to grow up to be on the graduation essay.
I had desired to become a scientist in the future, even though what I imagined was stereotyped and vague.
I was so curious about science as to buythat I bought a chemistry textbook for high school students and make itde a habit of reading it.
Alternative: "a high school chemistry textbook"
The feeling of sorrow or anxiety had never come to my mind at the graduation because I caouldn't wait the time to learn more complicated contents of sciences and mathematics at middle or high school.
More concise: "I never felt sad or anxious at graduation because I couldn't wait to learn more advanced science and math in middle or high school."
However, it became boring when I studied hard to pass the university entrance exams.
PThe physics theories and math formulas which I had to learn sounded like spells.
At that time, I happened to find the words of Richard Feynman, one of the most popular and talented physicists inof the 20th century, in the textbook.
One of his famous quotes about "what is the only one sentence should be passed on to the next generation of creatures if all of scientific knowledge were to be destroyed" remainded me of the day I was really into science.
Eventually, I got a master's degree ofin medical engineering and found a R&D research job.
I'm not sure if my dream has come true, but my interests in science stay alive.
June 27, 2021
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As the day of elementary school graduation was approaching, students were required to write what they want to grow up to be on the graduation essay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had desired to become a scientist in the future even though what I imagined was stereotype and vague. I had desired to become a scientist in the future, even though what I imagined was stereotyped and vague. |
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I was so curios about science as to buy a chemistry textbook for high school students and make it a habit of reading it. I was so curious about science Alternative: "a high school chemistry textbook" |
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The feeling of sorrow or anxiety had never come to my mind at the graduation because I can't wait the time to learn more complicated contents of sciences and mathematics at middle or high school. The feeling of sorrow or anxiety had never come to my mind at the graduation because I c More concise: "I never felt sad or anxious at graduation because I couldn't wait to learn more advanced science and math in middle or high school." |
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However, it became boring when I studied hard to pass the university entrance exams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Physics theories and math formulas which I had to learn sounded like spells.
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At that time, I happened to find the words of Richard Feynman, one of the most popular and talented physicists in the 20th century, in the textbook. At that time, I happened to find the words of Richard Feynman, one of the most popular and talented physicists |
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One of his famous quotes about "what is the only one sentence should be passed on to the next generation of creatures if all of scientific knowledge were to be destroyed" remained me of the day I was really into science. One of his famous quotes about "what is the only one sentence should be passed on to the next generation of creatures if all of scientific knowledge were to be destroyed" rem |
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Eventually, I got a master degree of medical engineering and found a R&D research job. Eventually, I got a master's degree |
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I'm not sure if my dream has come true, but my interests in science stay alive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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