Dec. 13, 2021
Science Magazine
A science magazine called "Newton" is very famous in both Korea and Japan.
I had subscribed a science manazine when I was a high school student.
There was no enough space to store in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college.
With my son's help, I find out that the magazine is now published in e-book.
I buy it right after that, and now I am reading it.
It is still interested for me.
Science Magazine
A science magazine called "Newton" is very famous in both Korea and Japan.
I had a subscribedption to a science manazine when I was a high school student.
You could also write here "I was subscribed to".
There was no enough space to store it in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college.
With my son's help, I fiound out that the magazine is now published ias an e-book.
When saying that something is being published in some form/format, you say "as a(n) ..." usually.
I buyought it right after thatwards, and now I am reading it.
"after that" isn't wrong, it just sounds a bit off, this is more natural when talking about events that happened a while ago.
It is still just as interesteding for me.
I added "just as" because I think you wre trying to say you still found it as interesting as you did before.
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Well-written, grammar was good with only some mistakes of expression. I'm glad you enjoy reading the maganize!
Dec. 14, 2021
Thank you so much!
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A science magazine called "Newton" is very famous in both Korea and Japan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had subscribed a science manazine when I was a high school student. I had a subscri You could also write here "I was subscribed to". |
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There was no enough space to store in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college. There was no enough space to store it in my room, so I cancelled the subscription when I was in college. |
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With my son's help, I find out that the magazine is now published in e-book. With my son's help, I f When saying that something is being published in some form/format, you say "as a(n) ..." usually. |
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I buy it right after that, and now I am reading it. I b "after that" isn't wrong, it just sounds a bit off, this is more natural when talking about events that happened a while ago. |
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It is still interested for me. It is still just as interest I added "just as" because I think you wre trying to say you still found it as interesting as you did before. |
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