I lived on the outskirts of town ages ago, So. I wentered a primary and secondary school in my little town.

This sounds more natural in the US.

However, when I got into Hhigh Sschool, my parents decided to move to live in the city.

SoIt was so that I could have studiedy in a more prestigious school with modern facilities and amenities.

It took me only a quarter of an hour15 mins to go to school.

Unlike some of my friends who had an aversion to school and just wanted to play truant from schoolky, I was eager to learn new things every day.

We use the word, "hooky, " in the US. It's slang but sounds very natural.

The other thing I loved about school is being able to see my friends.

The story is in the past so we should use all past tense verbs.

Our system has somehow become unduly stressful and does not promote creativity and the ability to be critical due to the fact that our society still cares way too much about the grades and, consequently, a school uses an exam-driven curriculum.

All in all, if you a're able to learn how to use information, you learn more than just memorizing for thean exam, You could use its benefits. These benefits are useful.

Ages ago, I lived on the outskirts of town ages ago, So. I wentered a to primary and secondary school in my little town.

It was a big school in my hometown that provided both high-quality education and a supportive environment, so I think I was pretty lucky.

You said it was your hometown in the last sentence so I don't think you need it here too.

It is indeed a have good memory ofies from that time.

However, when I got into Hhigh Sschool, my parents decided to move to live in the city so that I could study in a more prestigious school with modern facilities and amenities.

I think this flows better as one sentence.

So I could have studied in a more prestigious school with modern facilities and amenities.

It took me only a quarter of an hour15 minutes to go to school.

I think "15 minutes" is more natural than "a quarter of an hour"

Unlike some of my friends who had an aversion to school and just wanted to play hooky/truant from school, I was eager to learn new things every day.

"play hooky" means the same as "play truant", it is more casual.

To an extent, yes, butHowever, I also think itschool can be too theoretical sometimes.

Our system has somehow become unduly stressful and does not promote creativity and the ability to be critical. This is due to the fact that our society still cares way too much about the grades and, consequently, exam-driven curriculum.

You don't need "somehow" because you explain how in the next sentence.
I think dividing this in to 2 sentences makes it easier to read.

All in all, if you are able to learn how to ususe the information you learn in school for more than just memorizing for the exam, Yyou could use its benefits.

I lived on the outskirts of town ages ago, So. I entered a primary and secondary school in my little town.

"So" doesn't make sense to me in this context

It is indeed a have good memory ofies from that time.

You going to the school isn't really a memory in and of itself. You can have memories from that time period, but the time itself isn't a memory.

However, when I got into Hstarted high Sschool, my parents decided to move to live into the city.

If you "get into" a school, it means you applied and were accepted.

It took me only a quarter of an hour to goget to school.

One says it takes some time to "get" somewhere, not to "go to" somewhere.

I was definitely a good pupil, at least in my opinion.

If something is "definite", then it isn't based on opinion.

Plus, I found it relatively easy to learn things by heartmemorize things, which is useful when learning a language.

I think we have the expression "to know something by heart", but the expression "to learn something by heart" doesn't exist.

Yes, for sure.

I can't see what question you're answering here. It would be good to include the original question before the answer.

Unlike some of my friends who had an aversion to school and just wanted to play truant from school, I was eager to learn new things every day.

I've actually never heard the word "truant" before, so I can't correct how you used that. But since you're already talking about school, it sounds weird to mention "from school" again.

The other thing I loved about school iwas being able to see my friends.

I think you're talking about the past tense here? But if you meant to talk in the present tense then ignore this correction.

Our system has somehow become unduly stressful and does not promote creativity and the ability to be critical due to the fact that our society still cares way too much about the grades and, consequently, an exam-driven curriculum.

All in all, if you are able to learn how to use information, you learn more than just memorizing for the exam,. You could use its benefitsan benefit from the new information.

I wasn't sure what you meant by the second sentence so I just guessed.