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Ducky

Aug. 22, 2022

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I always have apreciated the live of all animals. I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and very close to us in intelligenlly. We cannot solve the climate crisis without protecting our oceans. The Earth is like a bubble and all is closely connected. Humans should be a bit fewer depredators.

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I have always have appreciated the lives of all animals.

"The lives of all animals" is somewhat formal.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and very close to us in intelligenllyce.

We cannot solve the climate crisis without protecting our oceans.

Humans should be a bit fewer denot act as predators.

"Depredator" is an old term no longer used in daily language. Since you are trying to say "humans should not be predators" or "humans should take fewer predatory actions," which are also unusual in common language, I recommend the change above. It is a big change, but I hope it fits your intended meaning.

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Overall good! I enjoyed reading this!

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Ducky

Aug. 24, 2022

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Thank you ever so much!

Save The Whales

I always have apreciated the live of all animals.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and are very close to us in intelligenllyce.

We cannot solve the cClimate cCrisis without protecting our oceans.

The Earth is like a bubble and all is closely connected.

Humans should be a bit fewer depredatorsmore considerate.

This is an odd phrase, so I’ve changed it to something that has the same meaning !

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Ducky

Aug. 23, 2022

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I'm very grateful for your feedback.

Save Tthe Whales

I have always have appreciated the lives of all animals.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and that they are very close to us in intelligenllyce.

We cannot solve the climate crisis without protecting our oceans.

The Earth is like a bubble, and as such, all is closely connected.

I would put a connecting phrase in between the two clauses.

Humans should be a bit fewernot be depredators.

I hope this is what you mean to say.

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I enjoyed reading your thoughts. I agree!

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Ducky

Aug. 23, 2022

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Thank you ever so much for your comments!

Save Tthe Whales

I have always have appreciated the livfe of all animals.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and very close to us in regards to intelligenllyce.

We cannot solve the climate crisis without protecting our oceans.

The Eearth is like a bubble and alleverything is closely connected.

Humans shouldn't be a bit fewersuch depredators.

There's no adjective/adverb that goes with depredator, so I had to change the structure.

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Ducky

Aug. 23, 2022

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Moltes gràcies.

Save The Whales


Save Tthe Whales

Save Tthe Whales

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I always have apreciated the live of all animals.


I have always have appreciated the livfe of all animals.

I have always have appreciated the lives of all animals.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have always have appreciated the lives of all animals.

"The lives of all animals" is somewhat formal.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and very close to us in intelligenlly.


I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and very close to us in regards to intelligenllyce.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and that they are very close to us in intelligenllyce.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and are very close to us in intelligenllyce.

I think that the dolphins and whales they are special, and very close to us in intelligenllyce.

We cannot solve the climate crisis without protecting our oceans.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We cannot solve the cClimate cCrisis without protecting our oceans.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The Earth is like a bubble and all is closely connected.


The Eearth is like a bubble and alleverything is closely connected.

The Earth is like a bubble, and as such, all is closely connected.

I would put a connecting phrase in between the two clauses.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Humans should be a bit fewer depredators.


Humans shouldn't be a bit fewersuch depredators.

There's no adjective/adverb that goes with depredator, so I had to change the structure.

Humans should be a bit fewernot be depredators.

I hope this is what you mean to say.

Humans should be a bit fewer depredatorsmore considerate.

This is an odd phrase, so I’ve changed it to something that has the same meaning !

Humans should be a bit fewer denot act as predators.

"Depredator" is an old term no longer used in daily language. Since you are trying to say "humans should not be predators" or "humans should take fewer predatory actions," which are also unusual in common language, I recommend the change above. It is a big change, but I hope it fits your intended meaning.

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