Jan. 5, 2021
SASUKE
I like watching a TV program: SASUKE. In this program, players try giant obstacle courses. The stages are first, second, third, and final stage, and few people clear the final stage. I thought the third stage is the hardest because there is a crazy barrier called Cliffhanger. In Cliffhanger, players have to grab a step whose width is really narrow and cross over to the other side. In addition, the current Cliffhanger has jump areas and a moving area. Its difficulty is crazy. However, a player, Yusuke Morimoto, hasn't failed in Cliffhanger. It's also crazy.
SASUKE
I like watching a TV programshow: SASUKE.
"TV program" (or "TV programme") is also used, but "TV show" is more common
In this programshow, players try to get through giant obstacle courses.
The stages are first, second, third, and finalre are four stages, and few people clear the final stage.
I thoughtfeel the third stage is the hardest because there is a crazyformidable barrier called Cliffhanger.
Generic adjectives like "crazy" are often used by children who don't have the vocabulary to use more precise words.
In Cliffhanger, players have to grab a step whose width is really narrow and cross over to the other side.
In addition, the current Cliffhanger has jump areas and a moving area.
Its difficulty is crazyextreme.
However, a player, Yusuke Morimoto, hasn't failed in Cliffhanger.
It's also crazy.
It's not clear what "it" refers to here. If it refers to Yusuke Morimoto, then it should be e.g. "he" or "she".
Jan. 6, 2021
Thank you so much!
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SASUKE This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like watching a TV program: SASUKE. I like watching a TV "TV program" (or "TV programme") is also used, but "TV show" is more common |
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In this program, players try giant obstacle courses. In this |
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The stages are first, second, third, and final stage, and few people clear the final stage. The |
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I thought the third stage is the hardest because there is a crazy barrier called Cliffhanger. I Generic adjectives like "crazy" are often used by children who don't have the vocabulary to use more precise words. |
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In Cliffhanger, players have to grab a step whose width is really narrow and cross over to the other side. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In addition, the current Cliffhanger has jump areas and a moving area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its difficulty is crazy. Its difficulty is |
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However, a player, Yusuke Morimoto, hasn't failed in Cliffhanger. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's also crazy. It's also crazy. It's not clear what "it" refers to here. If it refers to Yusuke Morimoto, then it should be e.g. "he" or "she". |
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