Feb. 13, 2024
Sapporo Snow Festival #3 (44)
I'd like to write more about the Sapporo Snow Festival.
I went to the Sapporo Snow Festival last week.
I noticed there were many foreign people at the festival venue.
I heard people speaking English and enjoyed listening to them, but I wasn't really able to understand them.
However, I rarely saw Japanese people there.
That's interesting isn't it?
I wonder Japanese people aren't interested in the festival.
I saw people who look like Japanese, but they weren't talking in Japanese.
Looked like they were tourists from other Asian countries.
When I took a taxi I tried asking the driver "Do you go to the snow festival?".
He said "No"
He also said that people in Sapporo are sick and tired of snow, and they really want spring to come.
札幌雪祭りについてもっと書きたいと思います。
先週、札幌雪祭りに行きました。
会場にたくさんの外国人がいるのに気が付きました。
英語を話してる人達がいて、それを聞くのが楽しかったけど、あまり理解できませんでした。
でも、そこでほとんど日本人に出会いませんでした。
これ、面白いですよね！
日本人は、雪まつりに興味ないのかなあ。
日本人のような人たちを見ましたが、彼らは、日本語を話していませんでした。
彼らは、他のアジアの国からの観光客だったようです。
タクシーに乗った時、運転手さんに「雪まつりに行きますか？」と聞いてみました。
彼は、「行かないよ。」と言いました。
それから、札幌の人達は雪にうんざりしていて早く春が来てほしいとおもってるんだよ。と言っていました。
Sapporo Snow Festival #3
I'd like to write more about the Sapporo Snow Festival.
I went to the Sapporo Snow Festival last week.
I noticed there were many foreign people at the festival venue.
I heard people speaking English and enjoyed listening to them, but I wasn't really able to understand them.
However, I rarely saw Japanese people there.
That's interesting isn't it?
I wonder if Japanese people aren't interested in the festival.
I saw people who looked like they were Japanese, but they weren't talking in Japanese.
LThey looked like they were tourists from other Asian countries.
When I took a taxi, I tried asking the driver "Do you go to the snow festival?".
He said "No"
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He also said that people in Sapporo are sick and tired of the snow, and they really want spring to come.
Feb. 14, 2024
Oh dear, the cab driver didn't seem to impressed by the snow! He is probably fed up with having it snow for so long. I wonder if he would like to take a holiday in Okinawa?
Feb. 14, 2024
I think so, too😅 He would enjoy spending time in Okinawa. Thank you for your correction!
Sapporo Snow Festival #3
I'd like to write more about the Sapporo Snow Festival.
I went to the Sapporo Snow Festival last week.
I noticed there were many foreign people at the festival venue.
I heard people speaking English and enjoyed listening to them, but I wasn't really able to understand them.
However, I rarely saw Japanese people there.
That's interesting isn't it?
I wonder if Japanese people aren't as interested in the festival.
I saw people who look liked Japanese, but they weren't talking in Japanese.
Looked like they were tourists from other Asian countries.
When I took a taxi I tried asking the driver "Do you go to the snow festival?".
He said "No"
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He also said that people in Sapporo are sick and tired of snow, and they really want spring to come.
Feedback
I can imagine. Hokkaido gets quite a lot of snow, so winters must be brutal.
Feb. 13, 2024
Thank you so much as always!
Sapporo Snow Festival #3
I'd like to write more about the Sapporo Snow Festival.
I went to the Sapporo Snow Festival last week.
I noticed there were many foreign people at the festival venue.
I heard people speaking English and enjoyed listening to them, but I wasn't really able to understand them.
However, I rarely sawee Japanese people there.
That's interesting isn't it?
I wonder why Japanese people aren't interested in the festival.
I saw people who look like Japanese, but they weren't talking in Japanese.
LIt looked like they were tourists from other Asian countries.
When I took a taxi I tried askingasked the driver "Do you go to the snow festival?".
He said "No"
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He also said that people in Sapporo are sick and tired of snow, and they really want spring to come.
Feb. 13, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
Sapporo Snow Festival #3
I'd like to write more about the Sapporo Snow Festival.
I went to the Sapporo Snow Festival last week.
I noticed there were many foreign peopleers at the festival venue.
More native this way.
I heard people speaking English and enjoyed listening to them, but I wasn't really able to understand them.
However, I rarely saw Japanese people there.
That's interesting isn't it?
I wonder if Japanese people aren't interested in the festival.
I saw people who look liked Japanese, but they weren't talking in Japanese.
LThey looked like they were tourists from other Asian countries.
When I took a taxi I tried asking the driver "Doid you go to the snow festival?".
"Are you going to the snow festival?" also works.
He said "No"
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He also said that people in Sapporo are sick and tired of snow, and they really want spring to come.
Feb. 13, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
Sapporo Snow Festival #3
I'd like to write more about the Sapporo Snow Festival.
I went to the Sapporo Snow Festival last week.
I noticed there were many foreign peopleers at the festival venue.
"Foreign people" is grammatically correct, but the term "foreigners" is used much more frequently.
I heard people speaking English and enjoyed listening to them, but I wasn't really able to understand them.
HAlso/to add on/(remove the however), I rarely saw Japanese people there.
However is used to convey shifts in language. Here, you are adding on the fact that there weren't that many Japanese people at the snow festival which doesn't come to contradict your previous sentence.
That's interesting isn't it?
I wonder: why aren't Japanese people aren't interested in the festival.?
There are many ways to correct this sentence but here is my preferred way of styling it.
I saw people who look liked Japanese, but they weren't talking in Japanese.
These are stylistic and naturalistic corrections.
LThey looked like they were tourists from other Asian countries.
You'll want to insert a pronoun for new sentences.
When I took a taxi, I tried asking the driver "Doid you go to the snow festival?".
A comma is appropriate to end off the preposition. The question should be in the preterite.
He said "No" He also said that people in Sapporo are sick and tired of snow, and they really want spring to come.
Feedback
Overall, this is a pretty good continuation onto your previous posts! I wish you luck in improving your listening comprehension as well as your overall language journey. Keep it up!
Feb. 13, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! I want to improve my listening comprehension, so I'll try my best and keep listening to English.
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You'll want to insert a pronoun for new sentences.
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