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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 30, 2023

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Sam Altman and ChatGPT

The same month of last year. ChatGPT, a real super artificial intelligence ( AI ) released to the public, stunned the world. For decades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI became another profound technology that has changed the world quickly.

Humans are at the fork of the road, we are thinking of where and what will AI bring us.

The drama in OpenAI is still ongoing, The CEO of this giant tech, Sam Altman, was ousted by the board of directors, however, he soon returned. Meanwhile, the public is also curious about the real reason causing his short period of exile. I feel that Sam Altman is a cunning, not honest man, only from his exterior appearance. Furthermore, his avatar is in black and white in Twitter. I once mentioned this before on this website.

Sam Altman and ChatGPT are more than like a couple in love, they are training each other.

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Sam Altman and ChatGPT

TIn the same month of last year.,

I would change this to say "In December of last year"

ChatGPT, a real supern advanced artificial intelligence ( AI ) released to the public, and stunned the world.

ForIn the decades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI has becaome another profound technology that has changed the world quickly.

Humans are at thea fork ofin the road, where we are thinking of where and what will AI bring us.

"a fork in the road" is a set phrase, we always use it this way.

The drama inwith OpenAI is still ongoing, Tbut the CEO of this tech giant tech, Sam Altman, was ousted by the board of directors, h. However, he soon returned.

Meanwhile, the public is also curious about the real reason causingfor his short period of exile.

I feel that Sam Altman is a cunning, not dishonest man, but this is only from his exterior appearance.

Appearance is always the exterior of something, so no need to specify.

Furthermore, his avatar is in black and white ion Twitter.

I once mentioned this once before on this website.

Sam Altman and ChatGPT are more than like ajust couple in loved together, they are training each other.

Comparing them to a couple in love doesn't really fit here. Try this instead.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 2, 2023

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Thank you, you letting me know that the set phrase "a fork in the road" can be used in this situation. :-)

The sameis month of last year.,…

more natural:
- A year ago this month…
- Last November…

ChatGPT, a real (super) artificial intelligence ( AI ) was released to the public, stunneding the world.

I would omit “super” unless you’re saying it’s a Super Artificial Intelligence (SAI).

For dDecades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI became another profound technology that has changed the world quickly.

Suggestion: Like the internet, which had been invented decades earlier, this type of AI changed the world quickly and profoundly.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 1, 2023

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Thank you for providing an alternative correction! :-)

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Sam Altman and ChatGPT

The sameIn this month of last year.,

ChatGPT, a real super artificial intelligence ( AI ) was released to the public,. It stunned the world.

ForArriving decades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI became another profound technology that has changedadvent of the Internet, this is another incredible technology that has potential to revolutionise the world quickly.

"Profound" seems a bit out of place here, though it is not wrong.

Humans are at the fork of the road, we arenow at a crossroad, thinking of where and what AI will AI bring us.

The drama in OpenAI is still ongoingRecently, Tthe CEO of this giant techOpenAI, Sam Altman, was suddenly ousted by the board of directors, h. However, he soon returned.

Meanwhile, the public is also curious about the real reason causing his short period of exile.exile. The drama in this giant tech company is still unfolding.

I shuffled your sentences around for better flow.

Judging solely from his appearance, I feel that Sam Altman is a cunning, not and dishonest man, only from his exterior appearance.

Furthermore, his avatar is in black and white ion Twitter.

Technically it should now be X. :)

Sam Altman and ChatGPT are more than likejust a couple in love, they are training each other.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 1, 2023

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thank you for your time and corrections! :-)

Sam Altman and ChatGPT


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The same month of last year.


The sameIn this month of last year.,

The sameis month of last year.,…

more natural: - A year ago this month… - Last November…

TIn the same month of last year.,

I would change this to say "In December of last year"

ChatGPT, a real super artificial intelligence ( AI ) released to the public, stunned the world.


ChatGPT, a real super artificial intelligence ( AI ) was released to the public,. It stunned the world.

ChatGPT, a real (super) artificial intelligence ( AI ) was released to the public, stunneding the world.

I would omit “super” unless you’re saying it’s a Super Artificial Intelligence (SAI).

ChatGPT, a real supern advanced artificial intelligence ( AI ) released to the public, and stunned the world.

For decades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI became another profound technology that has changed the world quickly.


ForArriving decades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI became another profound technology that has changedadvent of the Internet, this is another incredible technology that has potential to revolutionise the world quickly.

"Profound" seems a bit out of place here, though it is not wrong.

For dDecades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI became another profound technology that has changed the world quickly.

Suggestion: Like the internet, which had been invented decades earlier, this type of AI changed the world quickly and profoundly.

ForIn the decades after the Internet had been invented, this type of AI has becaome another profound technology that has changed the world quickly.

Humans are at the fork of the road, we are thinking of where and what will AI bring us.


Humans are at the fork of the road, we arenow at a crossroad, thinking of where and what AI will AI bring us.

Humans are at thea fork ofin the road, where we are thinking of where and what will AI bring us.

"a fork in the road" is a set phrase, we always use it this way.

The drama in OpenAI is still ongoing, The CEO of this giant tech, Sam Altman, was ousted by the board of directors, however, he soon returned.


The drama in OpenAI is still ongoingRecently, Tthe CEO of this giant techOpenAI, Sam Altman, was suddenly ousted by the board of directors, h. However, he soon returned.

The drama inwith OpenAI is still ongoing, Tbut the CEO of this tech giant tech, Sam Altman, was ousted by the board of directors, h. However, he soon returned.

Meanwhile, the public is also curious about the real reason causing his short period of exile.


Meanwhile, the public is also curious about the real reason causing his short period of exile.exile. The drama in this giant tech company is still unfolding.

I shuffled your sentences around for better flow.

Meanwhile, the public is also curious about the real reason causingfor his short period of exile.

I feel that Sam Altman is a cunning, not honest man, only from his exterior appearance.


Judging solely from his appearance, I feel that Sam Altman is a cunning, not and dishonest man, only from his exterior appearance.

I feel that Sam Altman is a cunning, not dishonest man, but this is only from his exterior appearance.

Appearance is always the exterior of something, so no need to specify.

Furthermore, his avatar is in black and white in Twitter.


Furthermore, his avatar is in black and white ion Twitter.

Technically it should now be X. :)

Furthermore, his avatar is in black and white ion Twitter.

I once mentioned this before on this website.


I once mentioned this once before on this website.

Sam Altman and ChatGPT are more than like a couple in love, they are training each other.


Sam Altman and ChatGPT are more than likejust a couple in love, they are training each other.

Sam Altman and ChatGPT are more than like ajust couple in loved together, they are training each other.

Comparing them to a couple in love doesn't really fit here. Try this instead.

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