April 19, 2024
Sakura
The season of the cherry blossoms, which were in full bloom in the first half of April, was already over.
During that time I could obiously recongnize the cherry blossoms here and there on the mountains. Now, they have completely blended into the surrounding greenery.
The cherry blossoms are very fragil and short lived.
４月の前半に咲き誇った桜ももう終わった。山にはピンク色の桜があちらこちらに見られた。今では周りの緑に完全に同化している。桜はとてもはかないもだ。桜の命ははかないもんだ。
Sakura
The season of the cherry blossoms, which were in full bloom in the first half of April, wais already over.
During that time frame, I could obviously recongnize the cherry blossoms here and there onthat were scattered all over the mountains.
Now, they have completely blended into the surrounding greenery.
The cherry blossoms are very fragil and short lived.
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The season of the cherry blossoms, which were in full bloom in the first half of April, wais already over.
During that timeseason I could obviously recongnize the cherry blossoms here and there on the mountains.
More natural might be “I could clearly see the cherry blossoms”
Now, they have completely blended into the surrounding greenery.
The cherry blossoms are very fragile and short lived.
The season of the cCherry blossoms season, which wereas in full bloom in the first half of April, wais already over.
During that time, I could obiously recongnize thclearly see cherry blossoms here and there on the mountains.
"obviously" means something is so clear you can't miss it, which makes it sound a little negative - like "I could obviously see the cherry blossoms, why can't you?"
Now, they have completely blended back into the surrounding greenery.
The cherry blossoms are very fragile and short lived.
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I love cherry blossoms. They must have been beautiful this year :)
April 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and explanation of "oviously".
The season of the cherry blossoms, which were in full bloom in the first half of April, wais already over.
During that time I could obiously recongnize, you could make out the cherry blossoms here and there on the mountains.
ex: make out a ship through the fog
Now, they have completely blended into the surrounding greenery.
The cherry blossoms are very fragile and short lived.
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Very pretty imagery!
April 19, 2024
Thank you for your correctios. I am happy to know "make out".
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During that time I could obiously recongnize the cherry blossoms here and there on the mountains. During that time ex: make out a ship through the fog During that time, I could "obviously" means something is so clear you can't miss it, which makes it sound a little negative - like "I could obviously see the cherry blossoms, why can't you?" During that More natural might be “I could clearly see the cherry blossoms” During that time frame, I could obviously reco |
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