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Aug. 19, 2022

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A Sachet

I bought a plain sachet in a book store today.
It was right at the entry of the bookstore and its fragrance intrigued me. It smelled of wormwood. I was full of anxiety and frustration at the time, but when I caught the scent , I felet comforted and calm. The fragrance conveyed a non-verbal message to me.
It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a pyramid . Quite good-looking. I took it for twenty yuan and hung it on my canvas bag.


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A sachet

I bought a plain sachet in a book store today.

It was right at the entry of the bookstore and its fragrance intrigued me.

It's a smelled of wormwood.

I was full of anxiety and frustration that the time, but when I smelled ithe taste , I feelt comforted and calmed down.

The smell conveyed a non-verbal message to me.

It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a pyramid with round.

Not sure what you meant when you said looks like a pyramid with "round." Sorry I don't know how to correct this sentence.

Quite good-looking.

I takebought it for twenty yuan and haung it on my canvas bag.

or you could say "I took it for twenty yuan..."

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Nice job! Enjoyed reading your story.

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MingMing

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thanks!

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kaaren

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thanks!

You are welcome!

I bought a plain sachet in a book store today.

It was right at the entry of the bookstore and its fragrance intrigued me.

It's a smells of wormwood.

At the time, I was full of anxiety and frusration that time, but when I smelled the taste caught the scent, I feelt comforted and calmed down.

Taste is a word used to describe things that are edible e.g. the cake tastes sweet, the curry tastes spicy, the coffee tastes bitter.
Scent is a word used to describe the way things smell e.g. the scent of wormwood

The smell conveyed a non-verbal message to me.

I takebought it for twenty yuan and haung it on my canvas bag.

Past tense

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MingMing

Aug. 20, 2022

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Thanks!

A sSachet

We capitalize the first letter of important words in a title.

I bought a plain sachet in a book store today.

It was right at the entry of the bookstore and its fragrance intrigued me.

It's a smelled of wormwood.

I was full of anxiety and frustration that the time, but, when I smelled the taste sachet, I feelt comforted and calmed down.

The smellfragrance conveyed a non-verbal message to me.

US alternative

It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a round pyramid with round.

I'm not sure what a "pyramid with round" is, so this is my best guess at a correction.

QIt's quite good-looking.

I takebought it for twenty yuan and haung it on my canvas bag.

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Nice work!

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MingMing

Aug. 20, 2022

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It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a round pyramid with round.

When I mean It's not sharp, it's somehow rounded

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mari

Aug. 20, 2022

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When I mean It's not sharp, it's somehow rounded

oh, I see. Thanks! Here's my corrected sentence: "It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a rounded pyramid."

I hope this helps!

sachet


I bought a plain sachet in a book store today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought a plain sachet in a book store today.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was right at the entry of the bookstore and its fragrance intrigued me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a smell of wormwood.


It's a smelled of wormwood.

It's a smells of wormwood.

It's a smelled of wormwood.

I was full of anxiety and frusration that time, but when I smelled the taste , I feel comforted and calmed down.


I was full of anxiety and frustration that the time, but, when I smelled the taste sachet, I feelt comforted and calmed down.

At the time, I was full of anxiety and frusration that time, but when I smelled the taste caught the scent, I feelt comforted and calmed down.

Taste is a word used to describe things that are edible e.g. the cake tastes sweet, the curry tastes spicy, the coffee tastes bitter. Scent is a word used to describe the way things smell e.g. the scent of wormwood

I was full of anxiety and frustration that the time, but when I smelled ithe taste , I feelt comforted and calmed down.

The smell carry out a non-verbal message to me.


It's made of houndstooth fabric, and it looks like a pyramid with round.


So I take it for twenty yuan and hang it on my canvas bag.


A sachet


A sSachet

We capitalize the first letter of important words in a title.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The smell conveyed a non-verbal message to me.


The smellfragrance conveyed a non-verbal message to me.

US alternative

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a pyramid with round.


It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a round pyramid with round.

I'm not sure what a "pyramid with round" is, so this is my best guess at a correction.

It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a pyramid with round.

Not sure what you meant when you said looks like a pyramid with "round." Sorry I don't know how to correct this sentence.

Quite good-looking.


QIt's quite good-looking.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I take it for twenty yuan and hang it on my canvas bag.


I takebought it for twenty yuan and haung it on my canvas bag.

I takebought it for twenty yuan and haung it on my canvas bag.

Past tense

I takebought it for twenty yuan and haung it on my canvas bag.

or you could say "I took it for twenty yuan..."

It smelled of wormwood.


I was full of anxiety and frustration at the time, but when I caught the scent , I felet comforted and calme.


The fragrance conveyed a non-verbal message to me.


It's made of houndstooth fabric, and looks like a pyramid .


I took it for twenty yuan and hung it on my canvas bag.


A Sachet


I was full of anxiety and frustration at the time, but when I caught the scent , I felet comforted and calm.


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