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Jack

July 19, 2023

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Sabin

Another language partner was Sabin, who was from New York City. We knew each other also on HelloTalk.

We sent text messages at first. One day she told me she could voice call me one time each week.

When she voice called me via WeChat, I listened to her very carefully. You know, I didn't know a lot of vocabulary. My listening in English was not good, so I had to focus on her speaking to get what she was saying.

She was not a local American. She moved to the US with her parents from Haiti when she was little.

I helped her with her Chinese. I remember I bought HSK e books and sent them to her.

Somehow, we stopped doing this last year. But anyway, she is a very good person and I am very grateful.

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AI had another language partner wascalled Sabin, who was from New York City.

We knew each other alsomet on HelloTalk.

We sent text messagestexted each other at first.

One day, she told me that she could voice call me one time eachce a week.

You could also say 'One day, she told me that we could talk on the phone once a week'

When she voice called me viaon WeChat, I listened to her very carefully.

We usually just say 'call' for a voice call and then 'video call' for a video call.

You know, I didn't know a lot of vocabulary.

My English listening in English wasskills were not good, so I had to focus on her speaking to getunderstand what she was saying.

She was not a localoriginally from American.

She moved to the US with her parents from Haiti when she was little.

I helped her with her Chinese.

I remember I bought HSK e -books and sent them to her.

Somehow, we stopped doing thistalking last year.

But anyway, she is a very good person and I am very grateful. for her help.

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Jack

July 21, 2023

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Thank you very much.

AI had another language partner was, Sabin, who was from New York City.

We also knew each other also onon/from HelloTalk.

We sent text messages at first.

One day she told me she could voice call me once time eachevery week.

When she voice called me via WeChat, I listened to her very carefully.

You know, I didn't know a lot of vocabulary.

She was not a localn American native.

She moved to the US with her parents from Haiti when she was little.

I helped her with her Chinese.

I remember when I bought some HSK e -books and sent them to her.

Somehow, we stopped doing all of this last year.

But anyway, she iwas a very good person and I am very grateful for her.

Jack's avatar
Jack

July 19, 2023

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Thank you very much.

Sabin


Another language partner was Sabin, who was from New York City.


AI had another language partner was, Sabin, who was from New York City.

AI had another language partner wascalled Sabin, who was from New York City.

We knew each other also on HelloTalk.


We also knew each other also onon/from HelloTalk.

We knew each other alsomet on HelloTalk.

We sent text messages at first.


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We sent text messagestexted each other at first.

One day she told me she could voice call me one time each week.


One day she told me she could voice call me once time eachevery week.

One day, she told me that she could voice call me one time eachce a week.

You could also say 'One day, she told me that we could talk on the phone once a week'

When she voice called me via WeChat, I listened to her very carefully.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When she voice called me viaon WeChat, I listened to her very carefully.

We usually just say 'call' for a voice call and then 'video call' for a video call.

You know, I didn't know a lot of vocabulary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My listening in English was not good, so I had to focus on her speaking to get what she was saying.


My English listening in English wasskills were not good, so I had to focus on her speaking to getunderstand what she was saying.

She was not a local American.


She was not a localn American native.

She was not a localoriginally from American.

She moved to the US with her parents from Haiti when she was little.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I helped her with her Chinese.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I remember I bought HSK e books and sent them to her.


I remember when I bought some HSK e -books and sent them to her.

I remember I bought HSK e -books and sent them to her.

Somehow, we stopped doing this last year.


Somehow, we stopped doing all of this last year.

Somehow, we stopped doing thistalking last year.

But anyway, she is a very good person and I am very grateful.


But anyway, she iwas a very good person and I am very grateful for her.

But anyway, she is a very good person and I am very grateful. for her help.

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