Aug. 7, 2025
Saadet
Hello. I want to learn English but I am afraid . I don't speak English fluently. I don't know what to do. Could you help me learn English, please?
Could yousomeone help me learn English, please?
*Could you* makes sense but in English it's good to be more specific and not general. *Could someone* could help better address your audience (which is a group of readers) but you say "someone" because you assume that not literally everyone who reads this will be able to help. Modern English is both very literal and especially, *direct.* This is mostly my personal opinion as an English speaker and not a professional opinion, as from a teacher.
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Overall good work. Just be more direct. Don't be afraid to talk to us English speakers "in the face", so to speak :P
Saadet
Hello.
I want to learn English but I am afraid .
I don't speak English fluently.
I don't know what to do.
Could you help me learn English, please?
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Hello. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to learn English but I am afraid . I want to learn English but I am afraid |
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I don't speak English fluently. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't know what to do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Could you help me learn English, please? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Could *Could you* makes sense but in English it's good to be more specific and not general. *Could someone* could help better address your audience (which is a group of readers) but you say "someone" because you assume that not literally everyone who reads this will be able to help. Modern English is both very literal and especially, *direct.* This is mostly my personal opinion as an English speaker and not a professional opinion, as from a teacher. |
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