April 24, 2025
B.J. Habibie
B.J. Habibie had been striving since he was young to become an engineer. He studied abroad and never gave up. In the end, he successfully made the first airplane made in Indonesia.
B.J. Habibie bekerja keras sejak muda untuk menjadi insinyur. Dia belajar di luar negeri dan tidak pernah menyerah. Akhirnya, dia berhasil membuat pesawat pertama buatan Indonesia.
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Habibie hads been striving since he was young to become an engineer.
Habibie has been striving since he was young to become an engineer.
As mentioned by Caaynier, "had" should be "has":
The Present Perfect Continuous Tense is a tense used to describe an activity that started in the past and has persisted or continued until the current instant.
https://www.geeksforgeeks.org/present-perfect-continuous-tense
In the end, he successfully made the first airplane made in Indonesiabuilt Indonesia's first airplane.
In the end, he successfully built Indonesia's first airplane.
Your sentence has unnecessary repetition and unclear phrasing ("made" is repeated twice). It is also not clear whether the airplane was the first built in Indonesia or just the first of its kind.
There are slight variations in the spelling of some words between American and British English, and "airplane" is one example that you should be aware of. In American English, the official spelling is "airplane". In British English, the official spelling is "aeroplane". Both are valid and refer to the same thing – a "pesawat terbang".
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Kerja bagus. Terus berlatih.
Good work. Keep practising.
April 25, 2025
But he checked out of his life on September 11, 2019.....
April 28, 2025
If by "checked out of his life" you mean that the person died in September 2019, then your original sentence is indeed correct:
"Habibie had been striving since he was young to become an engineer."
However, your second sentence is still incorrect, per the above correction.
B.J. Habibie
B.J.
Habibie hads been striving since he was young to become an engineer.
Habibie has been striving since he was young to become an engineer.
"has/have been (verb)-ing"
Present perfect continuous tense
[ something done in the past, person is doing until present ]
He studied abroad and never gave up.
In the end, he successfully made the first airplane made in Indonesia.
April 24, 2025
Also put "hard"
striving "hard"
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Habibie had been striving since he was young to become an engineer.
Habibie ha "has/have been (verb)-ing" Present perfect continuous tense [ something done in the past, person is doing until present ]
Habibie ha As mentioned by Caaynier, "had" should be "has": The Present Perfect Continuous Tense is a tense used to describe an activity that started in the past and has persisted or continued until the current instant. https://www.geeksforgeeks.org/present-perfect-continuous-tense |
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He studied abroad and never gave up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the end, he successfully made the first airplane made in Indonesia. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
In the end, he successfully Your sentence has unnecessary repetition and unclear phrasing ("made" is repeated twice). It is also not clear whether the airplane was the first built in Indonesia or just the first of its kind. There are slight variations in the spelling of some words between American and British English, and "airplane" is one example that you should be aware of. In American English, the official spelling is "airplane". In British English, the official spelling is "aeroplane". Both are valid and refer to the same thing – a "pesawat terbang". |
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