Thanks to people who will take their time to help me by proofreading this text. Thanks to people who will take their time to help me by proofreading this text.

Thanks to you to the people who will take the time to help me by proofreading this text. Thank you to the people who will take the time to help me by proofreading this text.

On ajoute toujours "the" quand on parle d'un groupe de personnes inconnues.

Hello every body. Hello everybody.

Hello every body. Hello everybody.

My name is David and I'm fFrench. My name is David and I'm French.

Nationalities are always capitalized.

My name is David and I'm fFrench. My name is David and I'm French.

I joined this website with the goal of improving my writing expressionskills. I joined this website with the goal of improving my writing skills.

I joined this website with the goal of improving my writing expression.skills (ou bien my written English) I joined this website with the goal of improving my writing skills (ou bien my written English)

I've studied eEnglish for more than twenty years now. I've studied English for more than twenty years now.

Languages are always capitalized.

I've studied english for more than twenty years now. I've studied english for more than twenty years now.

But I have to confess that, as a lot of little fyoung French students, I was not very involved during the first ten years: the years spent at school. But I have to confess that, as a lot of young French students, I was not very involved during the first ten years: the years spent at school.

But I have to confess that, as a lot oflike many little fFrench students, I was not very involved duringengaged for the first ten years: (the years spent at school.) But I have to confess that, like many little French students, I was not very engaged for the first ten years (the years spent at school.)

It is just after I became an helicopter pilot (or during the course I attended for that) that I realized how much this language could be helpful and useful for my job. It is just after I became a helicopter pilot (or during the course I attended for that) that I realized how much this language could be helpful and useful for my job.

It is justwas only after I became an helicopter pilot (or during the course I attended for that) that I realized how much this language could be helpful and useful for my job. It was only after I became an helicopter pilot (or during the course I attended for that) that I realized how much this language could be helpful and useful for my job.

In fact, it was essential S, so I decided to get more involved in learning eEnglish. In fact, it was essential, so I decided to get more involved in learning English.

In fact it was essential. So, I decided to get more involved in learning eEnglish. In fact it was essential. So, I decided to get more involved in learning English.

I attended several courses, seized each occasions to talk in eEnglish. I attended several courses, seized each occasion to talk in English.

I attended several courses, seize each occasionsjumping at every opportunity to talk in eEnglish. I attended several courses, jumping at every opportunity to talk in English.

opportunity ou chance marchent beaucoup mieux ici que "occasion."

The main things which improve the mostd my skills the most was the time I spent embedded with American pilots during four months, without any fFrench people to talk with around me. The main things which improved my skills the most was the time I spent embedded with American pilots during four months, without any French people to talk with around me.

The main things which improve the mostd my skills the most was the time I spent embeddnlisted with American pilots duringfor four months, without any fFrench people to talk with around me. The thing which improved my skills the most was the time I spent enlisted with American pilots for four months, without any French people to talk with around me.

Je ne sais pas ce que vous voulez dire par embedded. Engagé dans l'armée? (Enlisted)

This "Texas time" (yes, those guys were all Texan). This "Texas time" (yes, those guys were all Texan).

QIt was quite difficult to decrypt/ understand the accent at the beginning ...). It was a revelation that even if themy vocabulary and even the syntax used to speak are not always correct, I'm able to have a conversation with natives. It was quite difficult to decrypt/ understand the accent at the beginning. It was a revelation that even if my vocabulary and even the syntax used to speak are not always correct, I'm able to have a conversation with natives.

Quite difficult to decryptunderstand the accent at the beginning ...) it was a revelation (to discover) that even if the vocabulary and even the syntax used to speak are not always correct, I'm able to have a conversation with native speakers. Quite difficult to understand the accent at the beginning ...) it was a revelation (to discover) that even if the vocabulary and the syntax used to speak are not always correct, I'm able to have a conversation with native speakers.

"natives" est un mot péjoratif pour parler d'une population indigène...ajoutez le mot speakers :)

Since this moment, with a reeinforced motivation, I've continued to work hard to enhance my skills. Since this moment, with a reinforced motivation, I've continued to work hard to enhance my skills.

Since this moment, with a reenforceat time, with renewed motivation, I've continued to work hard to enhance my skills. Since that time, with renewed motivation, I've continued to work hard to enhance my skills.

However, even if my oral and written comprehension are quite good, my oral and written expression must be improved in order to be more fluid and closer fromto the native language. However, even if my oral and written comprehension are quite good, my oral and written expression must be improved in order to be more fluid and closer to the native language.

However even if my oral and written comprehension are quite good, my oral and written expression must be improved in order to be more fluid and closer from native language.sound more natural. However even if my oral and written comprehension are quite good, my oral and written expression must be improved in order to be more fluid and sound more natural.