Nov. 21, 2021
Went to The Food Industry Show in Taipei
This weekend, my family and I attended the Food Industry Show in Taipei by driving. We have some acquainted friends who exhibited their products. My husband assisted one of them with booth design. The venue was so big, and my feet were killing me! The best part was the free food samples. I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc. What a great tea time! We bought some products at a discount price. I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I am using. I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil with a 75% discount. It was a real bargain.
<p>這個周末，我與家人開車到台北參加今年的食品展。我們有些認識的朋友也在那裏參展。我丈夫協助某一家廠商攤位設計。會展很大，走的腳好痠! 最棒的部分是很多廠商提供試吃活動，我嘗試了麵包、牛奶、優格、豬肉乾、茶、咖啡和茶油。多麼棒的下午茶啊! 我們買了一些優惠的產品。我買了一組削皮刀，這種削皮刀比我現在正在用的還要好削蔬果。我還買了一瓶打了75折的茶油，還滿划算的。</p>
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This weekend, my family and I attended the Food Industry Show in Taipei. We got to the venue by driving. This weekend, my family and I attended the Food Industry Show in Taipei. We got to the venue by driving.
We have some acquainted friends who exhibited their products. We have some acquainted friends who exhibited their products.
Alt: We have some acquainted friends who were exhibiting their products.
The venue was so big, andvery big so my feet were killing me!
The venue was very big so my feet were killing me!
I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc. I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc.
Alt: I tried many different products, such as bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, and tea-seed oil.
We also bought some products at a discount price. We also bought some products at a discount price.
I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I am using. I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I am using.
Alt: I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more efficiently than what I was using before.
In addition, I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil withat a 75% discount.
In addition, I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil at a 75% discount.
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Sounds like a nice weekend!
This weekend, my family and I attendeddrove to the Food Industry Show in Taipei by driving.
This weekend, my family and I drove to the Food Industry Show in Taipei.
We have some acquainted friendances who exhibited their products.
We have some acquaintances who exhibited their products.
My husband assisted one of them with booth design.
The venue was so big, and my feet were killing me!
The best part was the free food samples.
I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc.
What a great tea time!
We bought some products at a discount price.
I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I amhave been using.
I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I have been using.
I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil withat a 75% discount.
I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil at a 75% discount.
It was a real bargain.
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This is really good!
Nov. 25, 2021
Thanks for your correction and feedback.:)
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I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc. I tried the bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, tea-seed oil, etc. Alt: I tried many different products, such as bread, milk, yogurt drink, pork jerky, tea, coffee, and tea-seed oil. |
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Went to The Food Industry Show in Taipei |
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This weekend, my family and I attended the Food Industry Show in Taipei by driving.
This weekend, my family and I This weekend, my family and I attended the Food Industry Show in Taipei. We got to the venue by driving. This weekend, my family and I attended the Food Industry Show in Taipei. We got to the venue by driving. |
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We have some acquainted friends who exhibited their products.
We have some acquaint We have some acquainted friends who exhibited their products. We have some acquainted friends who exhibited their products. Alt: We have some acquainted friends who were exhibiting their products. |
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My husband assisted one of them with booth design. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The venue was so big, and my feet were killing me! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The venue was |
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The best part was the free food samples. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What a great tea time! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We bought some products at a discount price. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We also bought some products at a discount price. We also bought some products at a discount price. |
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I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I am using.
I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I am using. I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more easily than what I am using. Alt: I bought a set of peelers, which slice vegetables much more efficiently than what I was using before. |
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I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil with a 75% discount.
I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil
In addition, I also bought a bottle of tea-seed oil |
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It was a real bargain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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