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The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know. Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that, when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Adding a comma can help break up a long sentence into easily digestible chunks.
Suggestions:
• You could change the first “when” to “while” to avoid using “when” twice in the same sentence.
• You could say “sorry” instead of “disappointed.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
Alternative:
Today's video was somewhat satisfying to make, although it turned out a bit short.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had stoo many words to share with you that whenall. I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I all and felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
I don't fully understand the context of this video, but "you" sounds like you're just talking to one person rather than your entire audience. The sentence also ran a bit long.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks you in advance.
Your writing felt a bit too formal for "Thanks".
Feedback
Great writing! Very understandable
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
FI finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
Sounds a little more natural.
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many wordsuch to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record themit all, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
Feedback
Good job!
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