March 4, 2026
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know. Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
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The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that, when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier. When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that, when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Adding a comma can help break up a long sentence into easily digestible chunks.
Suggestions:
• You could change the first “when” to “while” to avoid using “when” twice in the same sentence.
• You could say “sorry” instead of “disappointed.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief. Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
Alternative:
Today's video was somewhat satisfying to make, although it turned out a bit short.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
March 5, 2026
Thanks again！
I got your points.
Have a nice day!
March 5, 2026
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March 7, 2026
I have some time today, so I’ll provide a bit of feedback on the video:
• I was unable to understand the first three words until I went back and read the captions. “Here is the last plant” sounded to me like “hair izuh lass plant.”
• “little golden bean” - the “i” in “little” should rhyme with “hit” but instead it sounds to me like it rhymes with “heat.”
• “those small fruits” - The “t” is missing in “fruits.”
• “quite fitting” - the “i” in “fitting” should rhyme with “hit” but instead it sounds like it rhymes with “hate.”
• “tangerine tree” - “tree” should rhyme with “bee” but instead it sounds like “tray” to me.
I hope this feedback helps and doesn’t discourage you! The video is really good—these issues are minor.
March 8, 2026
Thanks again!
That's what I was looking for -- some feedback to improve my speaking English.
I really appreciate it and will try to avoid these issues you mentioned.
Have a nice day!
March 8, 2026
You’re welcome! And thanks, you have a nice day, too.
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier. When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many words to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
Finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had stoo many words to share with you that whenall. I realized I didn't have enough time to record them, I all and felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had too many words to share with you all. I realized I didn't have enough time to record them all and felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
I don't fully understand the context of this video, but "you" sounds like you're just talking to one person rather than your entire audience. The sentence also ran a bit long.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks you in advance.
Thank you in advance.
Your writing felt a bit too formal for "Thanks".
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Great writing! Very understandable
March 5, 2026
Thank you so much!
I'm a little confused about "you". Previously, I chose to use " you guys" here. Then, I was told that"you guys" is not friendly to girls, and I could just use "you."
If I remember correctly, at that time, it was informed that "all" was not necessary.
March 5, 2026
For most Americans, "you guys" can be gender-inclusive. You can even use it for a group of girls or non-binary people. Despite this, I typically use "you all" and "y'all" as there is zero confusion around inclusivity of gender.
You definitely can just use "you" instead of "you all", but you generally will hear "you all" as it is more clear.
March 6, 2026
Got it!
Thanks again!
The Fourth and Last Plant I Bought for This Chinese New Year
FI finally, I found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
I finally found the time to finish and upload this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/MR6p3aiY_Mc
Sounds a little more natural.
It's fun to narrate this kind of video; it feels like chatting with a friend face-to-face.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so many wordsuch to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record themit all, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
When I was editing yesterday's video, I had so much to share with you that when I realized I didn't have enough time to record it all, I felt a bit disappointed for not starting earlier.
Today's video was somewhat satisfying, although it was very brief.
As usual, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
As usual, if you find any mistakes please let me know.
Your feedback is very important to me.
Thanks in advance.
Feedback
Good job!
March 5, 2026
Thanks again!
Have a nice day!
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