Princesses Princesses

or Being a Princess

Which girl doesn't dream tof being a princess. Which girl doesn't dream of being a princess.

Whichat girl doesn't dream tof being a princess. with beautiful dresses, a big castle and a crown? What girl doesn't dream of being a princess with beautiful dresses, a big castle and a crown?

Me! I don't.

Whichat girl doesn't dream tof being a princess.? What girl doesn't dream of being a princess?

With beautiful dresses, a big castle and a crown.

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This livfe seems perfect and great. This life seems perfect and great.

This kind of livfe seems perfect and great. This kind of life seems perfect and great.

Thiseir livfe seems perfect and great. Their life seems perfect and great.

Or you could say "this life" too :)

Yes it give, there's a big bedroom, a manylot of money and power. Yes, there's a big bedroom, a lot of money and power.

Yes, it givprovides a big bedroom, a manylot of money and power. Yes, it provides a big bedroom, a lot of money and power.

Yes it give, there is a big bedroom a manynd money and power. Yes, there is a big bedroom and money and power.

But would ýyou like to know my minds.opinion? But would you like to know my opinion?

But wWould ýyou like to know my minds.what I think? Would you like to know what I think?

Try to avoid beginning sentences with "but."

But would ýyou like to know my minds.opinion? But would you like to know my opinion?

To be like a princess could be a nightmare. To be a princess could be a nightmare.

To be likeBeing a princess could be a nightmare. Being a princess could be a nightmare.

To be likeBeing a princess could be a nightmare. Being a princess could be a nightmare.

You think that I am crazy then l? Listening to me. You think that I am crazy? Listen to me.

You would rather think that I'm crazy theninstead of listening to mewhat I have to say. You would rather think that I'm crazy instead of listening to what I have to say.

You might think that I am crazy then, but listening to me. You might think that I am crazy, but listen to me.

Princesses have horribley stressful lives. Princesses have horribly stressful lives.

Princesses have horrible stress. Princesses have horrible stress.

Princesses have horrible stress. Princesses have horrible stress.

Since there are little children mustFrom a young age a princess hards to work hard and study. From a young age a princess has to work hard and study.

Since there aFrom the time when they're little children must a, princesses hard workve to work hard and study. From the time when they're little children, princesses have to work hard and study.

Since therey are little children must a, princesses must work hard work and study. Since they are little children, princesses must work hard and study.

For everything have themthey get the best teachers and the hardest instructionhave the toughest upbringing. For everything they get the best teachers and have the toughest upbringing.

For everything have themThey have the best teachers and the hardest instruction for everything. They have the best teachers and the hardest instruction for everything.

For everythingThey have them the best teachers for everything, and the hardest instruction. They have the best teachers for everything, and the hardest instruction.

They stuck perfection their whole liveir whole life they're expected to be perfect. Their whole life they're expected to be perfect.

They're stuck with perfection their whole lives in all that they learn whether its in dance, fighting, horse riding or music. They're stuck with perfection their whole lives in all that they learn whether its in dance, fighting, horse riding or music.

"They" is plural so we need to remain consistent throughout the whole sentence.

They are stuck in perfection their whole lives. They are stuck in perfection their whole lives.

All that they learn is to dance, to fight, horse rindingw to ride a horse, and music. All they learn is to dance, to fight, how to ride a horse, and music.

All that they learn dance, fight, horse rinding and music.

This is another incomplete sentence.

All that and they also learn to dance, fight, horse rinding andride horses and play music. All that and they also learn to dance, fight, ride horses and play music.

But the most horrible thing as a princess: your livfe isn' not your own. But the most horrible thing as a princess: your life is not your own.

But tThe most horrible thing asbout being a princess, however, is that your livfe isn't your own. The most horrible thing about being a princess, however, is that your life isn't your own.

Correct!

But the most horrible thing as a princess your livfe isn't your own. But the most horrible thing as a princess your life isn't your own.

Great sentence!

All wantEverybody always thatwants you be the best, and everyone tells you what should you love and what notand should not love. Everybody always wants you be the best, and everyone tells you what should and should not love.

All wantEverybody always thatwants you to be the best andso everyone tells you what you should you love and what not to love. Everybody always wants you to be the best so everyone tells you what you should love and what not to love.

All want always that youEveryone always wants for you to be the best, and everyone tells you what you should you love and what notyou shouldn't love. Everyone always wants for you to be the best, and everyone tells you what you should love and what you shouldn't love.

Even who you have to marriedy, just because of money. Even who you have to marry, just because of money.

EvenThey even tell you who you should marriedy just because offor the money. They even tell you who you should marry just for the money.

Even who you marriedy, just because of money. Even who you marry, just because of money.

When you bare a princess you haven't adon't have any freedom. When you are a princess you don't have any freedom.

When you bare a princess, you haven't adon't have any freedom. When you are a princess, you don't have any freedom.

When you b're a princess you haven't agot any freedom. When you're a princess you haven't got any freedom.

Your just a perfect barbie-doll that all makeshas to make everybody happy. Your just a perfect barbie-doll that has to make everybody happy.

Your're just trying to be a perfect bBarbie that all makesdoll who makes everybody happy. You're just trying to be a perfect Barbie doll who makes everybody happy.

Your're just a perfect barbie that all makes everyone happy. You're just a perfect barbie that makes everyone happy.