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Jan. 31, 2024

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Yesterday I saw a three year old boy who given a drum show. He played very well, even better than a teenager. Some audiences joked that the Meng Po Tang he had drunk was too light, which means his technique is too good to a three year old boy. (Meng Po Tang, only exists in legend, the function of which is to let the dead people who are going to re-born to delete their memories of former life. In those legends people believe we all have countless chance to live, but every time we re-born we will lose memories because of the soup we drink which named Meng Po Tang.)
Other people said that although he was only three years old, but the technique he used showed that he may had trained for thirty years.
And two days after that show which his mother uploaded to a short video app called TikTok, he gain over fourty thousands fans.
It is no doubt that he has talent in drums, and all seems like going well, But I have a bit worry about it.
People are desperate for followers those days because once they have enough followers they can make money for attaching ads or doing business. This drum show case shows a possibility of small babies catching eyes. Does there any parents that see this show and copy it, forcing their children to learn something that over their ability? Is it a totally good thing for kids do early training for head start advantage?
I hope we can protect not only our kids but also all kids, avoid the potential rick of over training from the parents.

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He played very well, even better than a teenager.

He played very well, even better than a teenager.

He played very well, even better than a teenager.


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Some audiences joked that the Meng Po Tang he had drunk was too light, which means his technique is too good to a three year old boy.


Some people in the audiences joked that the Meng Po Tang he had drunk was too light, which means his technique is too good tofor a three year old boy. Some people in the audience joked that the Meng Po Tang he had drunk was too light, which means his technique is too good for a three year old boy.

Some audiences joked that the Meng Po Tang he had drunk was too light, which means his technique is too good tofor a three year old boy. Some audiences joked that the Meng Po Tang he had drunk was too light, which means his technique is too good for a three year old boy.

(Meng Po Tang, only exists in legend, the function of which is to let the dead people who are going to re-born to delete their memories of former life.


(Meng Po Tang, only exists in legend, the function of which is to let the is a soup from a folk tale that lets dead people who are going to be re-born to delete their memories of their former lifeves. Meng Po Tang is a soup from a folk tale that lets dead people who are going to be re-born delete their memories of their former lives.

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I would say: (Meng Po Tang, which only exists in legend, is said to delete the memories of the dead before they are reborn.

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Yesterday I saw a three year old boy who given a drum show.


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Other people said that although he was only three years old, but the technique he used showed that he may had trained for thirty years.


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And two days after that show which his mother uploaded to a short video app called TikTok, he gain over fourty thousands fans.


And tTwo days after that show which his mother uploaded to a short video app called TikTok, he gain over fourty thousands fans. Two days after that show which his mother uploaded to a short video app called TikTok, he gain over fourty thousand fans.

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And two days after that show, which his mother uploaded to a short video app called TikTok, he gained over fourty thousands fans. And two days after that show, which his mother uploaded to a short video app called TikTok, he gained over forty thousand fans.

It is no doubt that he has talent in drums, and all seems like going well, But I have a bit worry about it.


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People are desperate for followers those days because once they have enough followers they can make money for attaching ads or doing business.


People are desperate for followers thoese days because once they have enough followers they can make money for attachingvia ads or doing business. People are desperate for followers these days because once they have enough followers they can make money via ads or doing business.

People are desperate for followers thoese days because once they have enough followers, they can make money for attachby having ads or doing business. People are desperate for followers these days because once they have enough followers, they can make money by having ads or doing business.

Does there any parents that see this show and copy it, forcing their children to learn something that over their ability?


Does there anyWill parents that see this show and copy it,start forcing their children to learn something that overexceeds their ability? Will parents that see this show start forcing their children to learn something that exceeds their ability?

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Is it a totally good thing for kids do early training for head start advantage?


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I hope we can protect not only our kids but also all kids, avoid the potential rick of over training from the parents.


I hope we can protect not only our kids but also all kids, avoid the potential ricksks of over training from the parents. I hope we can protect not only our kids but also all kids, avoid the potential risks of over training from the parents.

I hope that we can protect not only our kids but also allevery kids, to avoid the potential ricsk of over training from the parents. I hope that we can protect not only our kids but also every kid to avoid the potential risk of over training from the parents.

In those legends people believe we all have countless chance to live, but every time we re-born we will lose memories because of the soup we drink which named Meng Po Tang.)


In those legends people believe we allis folk tale, people have countless chances to live, but every time we are re-born we will loselose all our memories because of thea soup we drink which is named Meng Po Tang.) In this folk tale, people have countless chances to live, but every time we are re-born we lose all our memories because of a soup we drink which is named Meng Po Tang

In those legends, people believe we all have countless chances to live, but every time we are re-born, we will lose memories because of the soup we drink, which namis called Meng Po Tang.) In those legends, people believe we all have countless chances to live, but every time we are re-born, we will lose memories because of the soup we drink, which is called Meng Po Tang.)

This drum show case shows a possibility of small babies catching eyes.


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