Today was holiday. I was woken up at 6.o o'clock in the morning. Today was holiday. I was woken up at 6 o'clock in the morning.

You could also say "I woke up at 6 o'clock"

Today was holiday. I was woken up at 6.o o'clock in the morning. Today was holiday. I was woken up at 6 o'clock in the morning.

Today was a holiday. I was woke up at 6.o clock in the morning. Today was a holiday. I woke up at 6.o clock in the morning.

First I said goodbye to my mother goodbye before she goeswent to the work. First I said goodbye to my mother before she went to the work.

First, I said goodbye to my mother goodbye before she goeswent to the work. First, I said goodbye to my mother before she went to the work.

keep the tense the same, if it's past tense, than everything else should be past tense

First, I saiwaved my mother goodbye before she goes to thewent to work. First, I waved my mother goodbye before she went to work.

After that I malde meyself a breakfast a sandwich with tea. After that I made myself a breakfast sandwich with tea.

Or "I made myself breakfast, a sandwich with tea"

After that I malde meyself breakfast. It was a sandwich with tea. After that I made myself breakfast. It was a sandwich with tea.

After that I malde meyself breakfast, which consisted of a sandwich with tea. After that I made myself breakfast, which consisted of a sandwich with tea.

SoAfter that, I wasn't hungry anymore. After that, I wasn't hungry anymore.

SoAfter that, I wasn't hungry anymore. After that, I wasn't hungry anymore.

I watched my favourite episodes on Cthe computer with my sister. I watched my favourite episodes on the computer with my sister.

I watch my favourite episodes on Cshows on the computer with my sister. I watch my favourite shows on the computer with my sister.

Episodes are particular. Show is the general word for a drama/whatever you watch like The Simpsons is a show, the part when Bart goes to Paris is called an episode.

Then, I watched my favourite episodes on Cthe computer with my sister. Then, I watched my favourite episodes on the computer with my sister.

When we done she works for the school there and makewere done she did her homework. When we were done she did her homework.

When we are done, she works for the school there and makedoes her homework. When we are done, she does her homework.

Assuming she's a student.

When we done she works for thefinished watching them, she works (walked?) to school there and makedid her homework there. When we finished watching them, she works (walked?) to school and did her homework there.

In this time a read read one of my books from the library for a paircouple hours. I read one of my books from the library for a couple hours.

You said "In this time", if you'd like to emphasize that these two things happened at the same time, I would combine the sentences: "When we were done, she did her homework and I read one of my books from the library for a couple of hours."

In this time a, I read my books from the library for a paircouple hours. In this time, I read my books from the library for a couple hours.

Pair is usually for things, like a pair of sneakers.

InDuring this time a, I read my books fromin the library for a paircouple of hours. During this time, I read my books in the library for a couple of hours.

Then came my father came back and take iook us all to a restaurant . Then my father came back and took us all to a restaurant .

Then came my father came back and take iook us all to a restaurant . Then my father came back and took us all to a restaurant .

Again, keep the tense.

Then came my father came back and take iook us all to a restaurant . Then my father came back and took us all to a restaurant .

Only my big brother doidn't caome. Only my big brother didn't come.

Only my big brother doidn't caome. Only my big brother didn't come.

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Only my big brother doidn't caome. Only my big brother didn't come.

We all eate chicken and Cchips with Ddrinks. We all ate chicken and chips with drinks.

We all eathad chicken and Chips with Dwith chips and drinks. We all had chicken with chips and drinks.

"Eat" is a weird word to use for drinking, so I think "had" can just be used here.

We all eate chicken and Cchips with Ddrinks. We all ate chicken and chips with drinks.

So tThat was my whole day. That was my whole day.

So that was my whol(a summary) of my entire day. So that was (a summary) of my entire day.

I hope you'll liked it. I hope you liked it.

I hope you'll like it. I hope you'll like it.

Not wrong, but better to say: I hope you like it.