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Feb. 7, 2021

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SHAUN is dropping his remix of IU’s “Celebrity.”

SHAUN wrote in an Instagram Story that he’s releasing his remix of “Celebrity” tonight at 8:00 p.m. KST.

In the shared post, his fans can see a picture of the unpublished YouTube video of the “Celebrity” remix.

“Celebrity” is IU’s latest chart-topping single released Jan. 27.

The Korean singer-songwriter SHAUN took over Korean music charts in 2018 with his peachy pop track “Way Back Home.”

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SHAUN is dropping his remix of IU’s “Celebrity.”

SHAUN wrote in an Instagram Story that he’s releasing his remix of “Celebrity” tonight at 8:00 p.m. KST.

In the shared post, his fans can see a picture of the unpublished YouTube video of the “Celebrity” remix.

“Celebrity” is IU’s latest chart-topping single released Jan. 27.

The Korean singer-songwriter SHAUN took over Korean music charts in 2018 with his peachy pop track “Way Back Home.”

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Grammatically and spelling wise this is perfect. I'd think about the ordering of the sentences to make it flow even better

For example;
SHAUN is dropping his remix of IU’s “Celebrity.” which was IU’s latest chart-topping single released earlier in Jan. 27.

But that is just a recommendation, and yours also reads well. c

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DYY

Feb. 7, 2021

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Thank you very much! I really appreciate it! :)

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SHAUN is dropping his remix of IU’s “Celebrity.”


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SHAUN wrote in an Instagram Story that he’s releasing his remix of “Celebrity” tonight at 8:00 p.m. KST.


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In the shared post, his fans can see a picture of the unpublished YouTube video of the “Celebrity” remix.


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“Celebrity” is IU’s latest chart-topping single released Jan. 27.


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The Korean singer-songwriter SHAUN took over Korean music charts in 2018 with his peachy pop track “Way Back Home.”


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