June 1, 2026
Why I don't Like Telly.
Telly is a colloquial term for television.
One day, I was in a customer's home once and the person left the TV on but muted and stepped out of the room.
I was shocked when, on screen, one person pulled out a gun and killed another.
I thought, "My! This is entertainment? This is horrible!"
My wife and I quit using television in 2023.
I would never go back to having a TV in my home.
I plan to live weekends without electronic devices.
I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization.
I just want some time to think without electronic distractions.
I've been studying the book of John with the local pastor.
I want to read all the gospels from the perspective of seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself.
I was raised in a Christian family.
I always pray in my bedroom.
I pray three times a day on avarage.
Sometimes I fast for about 18 hours and pray.
Fasting is supposed to bring us closer to God.
Constantly praying will bring you closer to God and keep you away from Satan.
I pray to God to remove the distractions from my mind.
我不喜欢看电视的原因。“Telly”是“电视”的一种口语说法。
有一天，我到一位顾客家里去，那人把电视开着，但调成静音，然后离开了房间。
看到屏幕上一个人掏出枪并射杀了另一个人，我大吃一惊。
我当时就想：“天哪！这就是娱乐？这太可怕了！”
我和我的妻子在 2023 年就不再使用电视。
我再也不想在家里放电视了。
我打算在周末完全不使用电子设备。
我会用铅笔和纸，所以我没有放弃现代文明。
我只是想在没有电子设备干扰的情况下思考。
我一直在和当地的牧师一起研读《约翰福音》。
我想读所有福音书，从确切了解耶稣对自己所讲的话的角度去阅读。
我是在一个基督教家庭中长大的。
我总是在卧室祈祷。我平均每天祈祷三次。
有时我会禁食约 18 小时并进行祈祷。
禁食被认为能让我们更接近上帝。
常祈祷，就使自己与神亲近，远离撒旦。
我求神驱除我心中的杂念。
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Telly is a colloquial term for television.
One day, I was in a customer's home once and the person left the TV on, but muted, and stepped out of the room.
One day, I was in a customer's home and the person left the TV on, but muted, and stepped out of the room.
'once' feels unnecessary here
I was shocked when, on screen, one person pulled out a gun and killed another. I was shocked when, on screen, one person pulled out a gun and killed another.
My wife and I quit uswatching television in 2023.
My wife and I quit watching television in 2023.
I would never go back to having a TV in my home.
I plan to live weekends without electronic devices.
I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization.
I just want some time to think without electronic distractions.
I want to read all the gospels from the perspective ofby seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself.
I want to read all the gospels by seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself.
Feels more natural.
I was raised in a Christian family.
I always pray in my bedroom.
I pray three times a day on avarage.
Sometimes I fast for about 18 hours and pray.
Fasting is supposed to bring us closer to God.
Constantly praying will bring you closer to God and keep you away from Satan.
I pray to God to remove the distractions from my mind.
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Good job!
Why I dDon't Like Telly.
Why I Don't Like Telly.
This works, though it feels a little odd to me. Maybe "Why I Don't Like Watching the Telly"?
Telly is a colloquial term for television.
One day, I was in a customer's home once and the person left the TV on but muted and stepped out of the room.
One day, I was in a customer's home and the person left the TV on but muted and stepped out of the room.
Alternatively: "...and the person left the TV on, although it was muted, and stepped out of the room."
I was shocked when, on screen, one person pulled out a gun and killed another.
I thought, "My!
This is entertainment?
This is horrible!"
My wife and I quit uswatching television in 2023.
My wife and I quit watching television in 2023.
I would never go back to having a TV in my home.
I plan to livespend weekends without electronic devices.
I plan to spend weekends without electronic devices.
I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization. I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization.
You mean writing letters and sending mail?
I just want some time to think without electronic distractions.
I've been studying the book of John with the local pastor.
I want to read all the gospels from the perspective of seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself. I want to read all the gospels from the perspective of seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself.
This sentence is grammatically fine, but a little confusing to me. What sort of perspective do you mean here?
I was raised in a Christian family.
I always pray in my bedroom.
I pray three times a day on avaerage.
I pray three times a day on average.
Sometimes I fast for about 18 hours and pray.
Fasting is supposed to bring us closer to God.
Constantly praying will bring you closer to God and keep you away from Satan.
I pray to God to remove the distractions from my mind.
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Overall, well written!
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Why I don't Like Telly.
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One day, I was in a customer's home once and the person left the TV on but muted and stepped out of the room.
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This is horrible!" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My wife and I quit using television in 2023.
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I plan to live weekends without electronic devices.
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I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization. I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization. I will use pencil and paper, so I'm not abandoning civilization. You mean writing letters and sending mail? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I just want some time to think without electronic distractions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've been studying the book of John with the local pastor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to read all the gospels from the perspective of seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself. I want to read all the gospels from the perspective of seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself. I want to read all the gospels from the perspective of seeing exactly what Jesus said about himself. This sentence is grammatically fine, but a little confusing to me. What sort of perspective do you mean here?
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I always pray in my bedroom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I pray three times a day on avarage.
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Sometimes I fast for about 18 hours and pray. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fasting is supposed to bring us closer to God. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Constantly praying will bring you closer to God and keep you away from Satan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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