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One of the Ryan Trahan's concept is to try all the Airbnb categories. There are lot of categories but he wants to try literally all of them. In this video he just tried 4 categories. But I think he will continue the serie later. This serie will last a lot of time ahah.
In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in big farms. At the end of the video, he went to Paris with his girlfriend.
The ship Airbnb, the yalt (I don't know how to say that but it's the big ships) Airbnb was really amazing. It was so big. There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and the air conditionning.
The captain was driving the ship to Miami and when they arrived, Rayan slept in the boat while the man was going out.
The second Airbnb was a cabin. It looked nice but the wifi wasn't good. However, he succeed to watch the movie Ratatouille. He watched it because after going to different Airbnbs, he went to Paris and he wanted to know what they could do.
The third Airbnb was the best for me.
It was in the luxe category and when I saw the house, I understood why. The house was huge. There was a pool, an arcade room, many bedrooms, a big living room. The decoration was beautiful. It was quite simple but amazing. I think when I will we older, I will love to have a house like this.
The fourth and the last was an Airbnb pretty simple but with a huge farm. He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they will see them in Paris. Of course, he was allowed to.
To conclude, he passed two days in Paris with his girlfriend. He booked a traditional appartment. I didn't love it a lot because it looked like the Royal suits in the 1900's. Nevertheless, this appartment had a beautiful view over Paris and the Eiffel Tower. He toured the city and bought some croissants and chocolate bread.
I really appreciated this video and I hope you enjoy reading my text.
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Ryan Trahan visited, a famous American vlogger and YouTube icon, has tried out every Airbnb category
One of the Ryan Trahan's conceptgoals is to try out all (the) Airbnb categories.
NOTE: The 2nd "the" can be deleted/
BETTER: There are lot of categories but he8 different types of Airbnbs, and he has wantsed to try literally all of them.
In this video he just tried 4 categories.
But I think he will continue theis series later.
This serie will lastMY GUESS: To produce this series a lot of time ahahwas needed.
In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in big farms.[NOT: I could not understand of the meaning of this sentence.]
At the end of the video, he went to Paris with his girlfriend.
The ship Airbnb, the yaltQUESTION: What is a "yalt"? (This word is not in the English vocabulary.)
Ryan Trahan visited every Airbnb category
One of the Ryan Trahan's concepts is to try all the Airbnb categories.
There are lot of categories but he wants to try literally all of them.
In this video he justonly tried 4 categories.
But I think he will continue the series later.
This series will lasttake a lot of time ahah.
In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in big farms.
At the end of the video, he went to Paris with his girlfriend.
The ship Airbnb, the yalcht
(I don't know how to say that, but it's the big ships) Airbnb was really amazing.
It was so big.
There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and the air conditionning.
The captain was driving the ship to Miami and when they arrived, Rayan slept in the boat while the man was going out.
The second Airbnb was a cabin.
It looked nice but the wifi wasn't good.
However, he succeedwas able to watch the movie Ratatouille.
He watched it because after going to different Airbnbs, he went to Paris and he wanted to know what they could do.
The third Airbnb was the best for me.
It was in the luxe category and when I saw the house, I understood why.
The house was huge.
There was a pool, an arcade room, many bedrooms, and a big living room.
The decoration was beautiful.
It was quite simple but amazing.
I think when I will weWhen I am older, I willould love to have a house like this.
The fourth and the last was an Airbnb pretty simple Airbnb, but with a huge farm.
He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they will see see each othemr in Paris.
Of course, he was allowed to.
To conclude, he passed two days in Paris with his girlfriend.
He booked a traditional appartment.
I didn't really love it a lot because it looked like the Royal suits in the 1900's.
Nevertheless, this appartment had a beautiful view over Paris and the Eiffel Tower.
He toured the city and bought some croissants and chocolate bread.
I really appreciated this video and I hope you enjoy reading my text.
Please tell me how you found my English!
Ryan Trahan visited every Airbnb category
One of the Ryan Trahan's concepts is to try all of the Airbnb categories.
There are lot of categories but he wants to try literally all of them.
In this video, he just tried 4 categories.
Bbut I think he will continue the series later.
This can join the last sentence to avoid starting a sentence with 'but'!
This series will last a lot of time ahah.
In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in a big farms.
At the end of the video, he went to Paris with his girlfriend.
The ship Airbnb, the (yaltcht maybe?)
(I don't know how to say that but it's the big ships) Airbnb was really amazing.
It was so big.
There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and the air conditionning.
The captain was driving the ship to Miami and when they arrived, Rayan slept in the boat while the man was going out.
'Going out' is correct but 'left' may be better.
The second Airbnb was a cabin.
It looked nice but the wifi wasn't good.
However, he succeed to watch the movie 'Ratatouille'.
He watched it because after going to different Airbnbs, he went to Paris and he wanted to know what they could do.
The third Airbnb was the best for me.
It was in the luxe category and when I saw the house, I understood why.
The house was huge.
There was a pool, an arcade room, many bedrooms, a big living room.
The decoration was beautiful.
It was quite simple but amazing.
I think when I will weam older, I willould love to have a house like this.
The fourth and the last was an Airbnb - it was pretty simple but with a huge farm.
He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they will see t saw hemr in Paris.
Of course, he was allowed to.
To conclude, he passedspent two days in Paris with his girlfriend.
He booked a traditional appartment.
I didn't love it a lot because it looked like the Royal suits in the 1900's.
Nevertheless, this appartment had a beautiful view over Paris and the Eiffel Tower.
He toured the city and bought some croissants and chocolate bread.
I really appreciated this video and I hope you enjoyed reading my text.
Please tell me how you found my English!
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One of the Ryan Trahan's concepts is to try all the Airbnb categories.
More naturally: One of Ryan Trahan's concepts is to try all the categories of Airbnb.
There are lots of categories but he wants to try literally all of them.
Or: "There are a lot of..."
In this video he just tried 4 categories.
"In this video" -> "In his most recent video" or "In one of his videos"
"this" is used to refer to something that was just mentioned, e.g., "Ryan Trahan recently posted a video called "I Tried Every Airbnb Category". In this video..."
"he just tried 4 categories" -> "he only tried 4 categories"
"just" in the above phrase means more like "just" in "it just happened", or "he just arrived". "only" might be a better fit.
But I think he will continue the series later.
This series will lasttake a lot of time ahah.
or "last for a long time"
In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in big farms.
"in big farms" -> "on a big farm" OR "a house located in big farms" -> "a farmhouse"
If he lived in each Airbnb for a while (like a day), it would be better to say "In the video, he stayed at..."
The ship Airbnb, the yalcht
There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and the air conditionning.
The captain was drivingdrove the ship to Miami and when they arrived, Rayan slept in the boat while the man was going out.
If Ryan was sleeping when the man left the boat: "Ryan slept in the boat while the man went out"
If Ryan was sleeping in the boat during the time the man wasn't in the boat: "Ryan slept in the boat while the man was out"
It looked nice but the wifi wasn't good.
wifi could be written as Wi-Fi
However, he succemanaged to watch the movie Ratatouille.
I think when I will we older, I will love to have a house like this.
If you currently would love to have a house like this (but will only get it when you're older), then you would say "I would love to have a house like this when I'm older"
If you think that the future, older you would love to have a house like this: "I think that when I'm older, I would love to have a house like this"
Or something like that.
The fourth and the last was an Airbnb that was pretty simple but with a huge farm.
Better phrasing: "The fourth and the last Airbnb was pretty simple, but it had a huge farm." or "but it came with a huge farm"
He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they will see them in Paris.
-> "He went to the farm and cut some flowers to give his girlfriend when he sees her in Paris."
Of course, he was allowed to.
-> "Of course, he did this with (the owner's) permission."
To conclude, he passedspent two days in Paris with his girlfriend.
He booked a traditional appartment.
I didn't love it a lot because it looked like thea Royal suits ine from the 1900's.
We usually won't use "love" for this, we'd use "like".
I didn't really like it/I didn't like it much
Royal suits -> Royal suites? suits refers to the clothing, suites refers to a set of rooms.
Nevertheless, this appartment had a beautiful view overf Paris and the Eiffel Tower.
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I think when I will we older, I will love to have a house like this. I think when I will we older, I will love to have a house like this. If you currently would love to have a house like this (but will only get it when you're older), then you would say "I would love to have a house like this when I'm older" If you think that the future, older you would love to have a house like this: "I think that when I'm older, I would love to have a house like this" Or something like that. I think when I
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The fourth and the last was an Airbnb pretty simple but with a huge farm. The fourth and the last was an Airbnb that was pretty simple but with a huge farm. Better phrasing: "The fourth and the last Airbnb was pretty simple, but it had a huge farm." or "but it came with a huge farm" The fourth and the last was an Airbnb - it was pretty simple but with a huge farm. The fourth and the last was a |
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He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they will see them in Paris. He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they will see them in Paris. -> "He went to the farm and cut some flowers to give his girlfriend when he sees her in Paris." He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend He went to the farm and cut some flowers for his girlfriend in order to give her when they |
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He toured the city and bought some croissants and chocolate bread. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this video he just tried 4 categories. In this video he just tried 4 categories. "In this video" -> "In his most recent video" or "In one of his videos" "this" is used to refer to something that was just mentioned, e.g., "Ryan Trahan recently posted a video called "I Tried Every Airbnb Category". In this video..." "he just tried 4 categories" -> "he only tried 4 categories" "just" in the above phrase means more like "just" in "it just happened", or "he just arrived". "only" might be a better fit. In this video, he just tried 4 categories In this video he In this video he just tried 4 |
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But I think he will continue the serie later. But I think he will continue the series later.
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This serie will last a lot of time ahah. This series will or "last for a long time" This series will last a lot of time ahah. This series will
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In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in big farms. In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in big farms. "in big farms" -> "on a big farm" OR "a house located in big farms" -> "a farmhouse" If he lived in each Airbnb for a while (like a day), it would be better to say "In the video, he stayed at..." In the video, he went to a ship Airbnb, a cabin, a big luxurious house and a house located in a big farm This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It was so big. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and the air conditionning. There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and There was a shower, two bedrooms with TVs, a living room, a porthole and |
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The captain was driving the ship to Miami and when they arrived, Rayan slept in the boat while the man was going out. The captain If Ryan was sleeping when the man left the boat: "Ryan slept in the boat while the man went out" If Ryan was sleeping in the boat during the time the man wasn't in the boat: "Ryan slept in the boat while the man was out" The captain was driving the ship to Miami and when they arrived, Rayan slept in the boat while the man was going out. 'Going out' is correct but 'left' may be better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The second Airbnb was a cabin. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It looked nice but the wifi wasn't good. It looked nice but the wifi wasn't good. wifi could be written as Wi-Fi This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, he succeed to watch the movie Ratatouille. However, he However, he succeed to watch the movie 'Ratatouille'. However, he |
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