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Ryan Trahan tested them parks with bad reviews
Ryan Trahan is an American YouTuber.
11 month ago, he made video where he tested 3 them parks in America with bad reviews. His goal is to see the main criticize and to discover it what it's said in this is reallly true or fake. He will approve or busted the reviews.
The first parc looked pretty cool. It's not my dream them park but I think you can have fun and enjoy with friends or family.
In this park, everything turn. there are a lot of attractions. In the reviews, some people said that the food was really expensive. But, in fact, it wasn't true. They also said that the food was disgusting. However, it looked delicious.
He gave the note of 5 stars for this them park.
The second was a them park around the universe of the mythologie with Atalanta (I'm not sure about the name). It was a waterpark. I rarely go to a waterpark, so seing this makes me feel a bit jealous. This is a huge park, there are a beach, pools, and many other things.
Some people wasn't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them get hurted. He tested almost every attractions, and he didn't get injured. He said that it was a great experience.
The third and last was incredible! There were attractions where you can go really fast until 70 miles per hour.
He was terrified but he did the most fast attraction and he found it incredible.
However, the food was really expensive because buying only a piece of pizza costed you 19 dollars! It's so expensive!
With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a pinch of salt and be careful. Even if some parks look not good, it can be really good tough.
I hope you enjoy reading my text. Please tell me how you find my English!
Ryan Trahan tested theme parks with bad reviews
"Theme parks", not "them parks"
Ryan Trahan is an American YouTuber.
11Eleven months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America withat have bad reviews.
We typically advise against starting a sentence with a numeric value and instead would start it with the word for the number spelled out.
Here, "months" needs to be plural because there are 11 of them.
His goal is to see the main criticizesms and to discover it what it's said in this is realllywhether what has been said is true or faklse.
"Criticize" = verb; "criticism" = noun
We typically say "true" and "false" as opposites of each other.
He will approve or bustedf or disagree with the reviews.
We wouldn't really say "busted" here. You would maybe use that if you were talking about "busting a myth", but that's not quite right here.
The first parck looked pretty cool.
French spelling here lol - the English version ends with "k"
It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy with friends or family.
In this park, everything turns.
Here, you would say "turns" instead of "turn"...but I'm not sure what you mean by this. Do the rides turn a certain way?
tThere are a lot of attractions.
In the reviews, some people said that the food was really expensive.
But, in fact, it wasn't true.
They also said that the food was disgusting.
However, it looked delicious.
He gave the note of 5 stars for this them parkis theme park 5 stars.
The second was a theme park built around the universe of the mythologie withmyth of Atalantais (I'm not sure about the name).
I think you mean "Atlantis"...the underwater city?
It was a waterpark.
I rarely go to a water park, so seeing this makes me feel a bit jealous.
This is a huge park, t. There areis a beach, pools, and many other things.
Some people waseren't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them get hurted.
Verb tense here with "wasn't" - should be "weren't" because your subject is plural ("some people")
Past tense of "hurt" = "hurt"...confusing because it's the same word!
He tested almost every attractions, and he didn't get injured.
He said that it was a great experience.
The third and last park was incredible!
You'll want to specify here. Third and last what? Third and last park.
There were attractions where you can go really fast until, about 70 miles per hour.
He was terrified but he did the most fafastest attraction and he found it incredible.
We don't say "most fast", we say "fastest".
However, the food was really expensive because buying only a piece of pizza costed you 19 dollars!
Past tense of "cost" = "cost"...even more confusion!
It's so expensive!
With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a pinchgrain of salt and be careful.
The expression is "with a grain of salt".
Even if some parks don't look not good, it can be really good tough.
I hope you enjoy reading my text.
Please tell me how you find my English!
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Great job! Reading through your errors, I'm aware of how confusing English can be at times! There are lots of words that are exceptions to the rule. However, you made your points clearly, and you're doing a great job!
Ryan Trahan tested theme parks with bad reviews
Ryan Trahan is an American YouTuber.
11 months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America with bad reviews.
His goal is to seinvestigate the main criticizesms and to discover itf what it's said in thie reviews is reallly true or faklse.
When talking about claims, the opposite of true is false.
He will approve or busted the reviews.
The first parck looked pretty cool.
It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy it with friends or family.
In this park, everything turns.
I'm not sure what you mean by this. Does everything spin around? Or is it busy?
tThere are a lot of attractions.
In the reviews, some people said that the food was really expensive.
But, in fact, ithat wasn't true.
Using "that" to refer to something said previously.
However, it looked delicious.
He gave the note of 5 starsa 5 star review for this theme park.
The second was a theme park aroundset in the universe of theand mythologie withy of Atalantais (I'm not sure about the name).
I'm guessing, from context, that this theme park was themed after the sunken city of Atlantis.
It was a waterpark.
I rarely go to a waterparks, so seeing this makesde me feel a bit jealous.
Using past tense because this is something you saw in the past.
This iIt was a huge park, and there arewas a beach, pools, and many other things.
Some people waseren't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them geot hurted.
Plural "people" so use "were" instead. Past tense of "hurt" is just "hurt"
He tested almost every attractions, and he didn't get injured.
He said that it was a great experience.
The third and last theme park was incredible!
There were attractions where you can go really fast, untilp to 70 miles per hour.
"Until" is usually about time. When discussing other quantities, "up to" is more common.
He was terrified but he did the most fafastest attraction and he found it incredible.
However, the food was really expensive because buying onlyjust a piece of pizza costed you 19 dollars!
"Just" emphasizes how unusual this is, but "only" is okay.
It's so expensive!
With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a pinch of salt and be careful.
Even if some parks look not good, ithey can be really good though.
"Some parks" is plural, so "they" instead of "it".
I hope you enjoyed reading my text.
Please tell me how you find my English!
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This is a good lesson on not taking every review you see online at face value! Your writing was easy to understand and interesting to read.
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11 month ago, he made video where he tested 3 them parks in America with bad reviews. 11 months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America with bad reviews.
We typically advise against starting a sentence with a numeric value and instead would start it with the word for the number spelled out. Here, "months" needs to be plural because there are 11 of them. |
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His goal is to see the main criticize and to discover it what it's said in this is reallly true or fake. His goal is to When talking about claims, the opposite of true is false. His goal is to see the main critici "Criticize" = verb; "criticism" = noun We typically say "true" and "false" as opposites of each other. |
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He will approve or busted the reviews. He will approve or bust He will approve o We wouldn't really say "busted" here. You would maybe use that if you were talking about "busting a myth", but that's not quite right here. |
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The first parc looked pretty cool. The first par The first par French spelling here lol - the English version ends with "k" |
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It's not my dream them park but I think you can have fun and enjoy with friends or family. It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy it with friends or family. It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy with friends or family. |
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In this park, everything turn. In this park, everything turns. I'm not sure what you mean by this. Does everything spin around? Or is it busy? In this park, everything turns. Here, you would say "turns" instead of "turn"...but I'm not sure what you mean by this. Do the rides turn a certain way? |
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there are a lot of attractions.
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But, in fact, it wasn't true. But, in fact, Using "that" to refer to something said previously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They also said that the food was disgusting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He gave the note of 5 stars for this them park. He gave He gave th |
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The second was a them park around the universe of the mythologie with Atalanta (I'm not sure about the name). The second was a theme park I'm guessing, from context, that this theme park was themed after the sunken city of Atlantis. The second was a theme park built around the I think you mean "Atlantis"...the underwater city? |
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It was a waterpark. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I rarely go to a waterpark, so seing this makes me feel a bit jealous. I rarely go to Using past tense because this is something you saw in the past. I rarely go to a water park, so seeing this makes me feel a bit jealous. |
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This is a huge park, there are a beach, pools, and many other things.
This is a huge park |
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Some people wasn't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them get hurted. Some people w Plural "people" so use "were" instead. Past tense of "hurt" is just "hurt" Some people w Verb tense here with "wasn't" - should be "weren't" because your subject is plural ("some people") Past tense of "hurt" = "hurt"...confusing because it's the same word! |
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He tested almost every attractions, and he didn't get injured. He tested almost every attraction He tested almost every attraction |
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He said that it was a great experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The third and last was incredible! The third and last theme park was incredible! The third and last park was incredible! You'll want to specify here. Third and last what? Third and last park. |
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There were attractions where you can go really fast until 70 miles per hour. There were attractions where you can go really fast, u "Until" is usually about time. When discussing other quantities, "up to" is more common. There were attractions where you can go really fast |
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He was terrified but he did the most fast attraction and he found it incredible. He was terrified but he did the He was terrified but he did the We don't say "most fast", we say "fastest". |
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However, the food was really expensive because buying only a piece of pizza costed you 19 dollars! However, the food was really expensive because buying "Just" emphasizes how unusual this is, but "only" is okay. However, the food was really expensive because buying only a piece of pizza cost Past tense of "cost" = "cost"...even more confusion! |
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It's so expensive! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a pinch of salt and be careful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a The expression is "with a grain of salt". |
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Even if some parks look not good, it can be really good tough. Even if some parks look not good, "Some parks" is plural, so "they" instead of "it". Even if some parks don't look |
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I hope you enjoy reading my text. I hope you enjoyed reading my text. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please tell me how you find my English! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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