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Nov. 4, 2021

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Another day

Right, so today was a cool day. I had fun playing with my mates on the newly released beta of a PC game (which sadly will only be available for 5 days), which is supposed to come until next year. I rarely have the chance anymore to play with friends (due to timezones differences and general lack of time) so days like these make me quite happy.

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Another day

Right, so today was a cool day.

I rarely have the chance anymore to play with friends (due to timezones differences and general lack of time) so days like these make me quite happy.

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eeprom

Nov. 9, 2021

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Another day


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Right, so today was a cool day.


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I had fun playing with my mates on the newly released beta of a PC game (which sadly will only be available for 5 days), which is supposed to come until next year.


I had fun playing with my mates on the newly released beta of a PC game (which sadly will only be available for 5 days), which is supposed to come until next year. I had fun playing with my mates on the newly released beta of a PC game (which sadly will only be available for 5 days), which is supposed to come until next year.

"...which is supposed to come until next year" isn't quite correct. "Come" isn't wrong, but "come out" sounds more natural when talking about a game release. If you mean that the game is supposed to be released next year, "which is supposed to come out next year" is good, but if you are talking more about the long wait before it is released, "which is not supposed to come out until next year" works better.

I rarely have the chance anymore to play with friends (due to timezones differences and general lack of time) so days like these make me quite happy.


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