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roman_smart_brain

Oct. 31, 2021

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An 18th birthday party

Hi Ashley.

I would like to tell you about my brother's birthday. I had totally forgotten about it but when I saw how our family was preparing to the party I remembered what the day was. The day when my brother born.
Parents are going to orginize the event outside of the house. I have heard that they had booked in the agency which arranges such events it is necessary equipment.
The party will be begun as usual at 5 p.m. but I am sure it will start a bit later.

I have nothing idea what recommend you to buy for a present. In this question you can't count on me. In my opinion it is good thing if you bring a couple idea how to spend my brother's birthsday the best way.

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An 18th birthday party

I would like to tell you about my brother's birthday.

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roman_smart_brain

Nov. 2, 2021

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An 18th birthday party


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Hi Ashley.


Hi, Ashley. Hi, Ashley.

I would like to tell you about my brother's birthday.


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I had totally forgotten about it but when I saw how our family was preparing to the party I remembered what the day was.


I had totally forgotten about it, but when I saw how ourmy family was preparing tofor the party, I remembered what the day waday it is. I had totally forgotten about it, but when I saw my family preparing for the party, I remembered what day it is.

If you are inviting Ashley, the party is not in the past (the day is NOT was).

The day when my brother born.


The day when my brother was born. The day when my brother was born.

This sounds a bit weird. It's ambiguous. Is today your brother's birthday, or is it the day of his birth? Is he turning 18 or is he being born now?

Parents are going to orginize the event outside of the house.


PMy parents are going to orgianizeing the event outside of the house. My parents are organizing the event outside.

"of the house" is redundant, "going to organize" is weird because the party is so soon

I have heard that they had booked in the agency which arranges such events it is necessary equipment.


I have heard that they had booked ian the agency which arranges such events it is necessary equipment. I heard that they booked an agency which arranges such events.

I don't know what you meant by "it is necessary equipment", so I removed it.

The party will be begun as usual at 5 p.m. but I am sure it will start a bit later.


The party will be begun as usualgin at 5 p.m., but I am sure it will startonly start properly a bit later. The party will begin at 5 p.m., but I am sure it will only start properly a bit later.

Why "as usual"? Do all of your brother's birthday parties start at 5 p.m.???

I have nothing idea what recommend you to buy for a present.


I have nothing idea of what recommend you to buy foras a present. I have no idea of what recommend you to buy as a present.

In this question you can't count on me.


In this questionAs far as that goes, you can't count on me. As far as that goes, you can't count on me.

In my opinion it is good thing if you bring a couple idea how to spend my brother's birthsday the best way.


In my opinion, it is a good thing if you bringcome up with a couple of ideas of how to spend my brother's birthsday the best way. In my opinion, it is a good thing if you come up with a couple of ideas of how to spend my brother's birthday the best way.

Why does Ashley need to come up with ideas? Didn't your parents organize a party?

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