June 26, 2023
Running Make Me Relieved
About two years ago, I developed a long habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium. For some reason, however, I stopped till now.
During my running, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face. My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life. Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released from my body which was immersed in sweat. maybe these chemicals are one type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of pain then followed rebelieve.
Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us clear and focus spirit, relieved.
Running Makes Me Feel Relieved
あるいは、
Running Relieves My Stress
About two years ago, I developed a long habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium.
すごいですね！
For some reason, however, I stopped untill now.
「however」の使い方はとても上手です！
During my running, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face.
このの方が自然だと思います。リフレッシュできそうですね。
My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life.
すごい文ですよ！This sounds very poetic to me.
Based on my personal running experience, it seems somethat special chemicals were released from my body which was immersed inen I sweat.
このの方が自然です。
mMaybe these chemicals are onea type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of painfeel pain which is then followed rebby relievef.
面白そうです。
Running is really a good and helpful sports activity which can help us clear and focus spirit, relievedas well as relieve our spirits.
賛成しました！
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Scarlett_fartherさんの英語がいつも上手にできています。初めは難しいことだったのは、私が決してわからなかったので、今はびっくりしています。今回も上手に書けています！
June 27, 2023
勉強する必要がつくさん、いつもありがとうございます！：ー）
Running MakeBrings Me Relievedf
About two years ago, I developed a longregular habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium.
For some reason, however, I stopped untill now.
until - 'til could possibly by used as a very colloquial abbreviation. till is not the same thing.
During my runnings, I could feel thea gentle breeze touch my face.
My eyes always looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life.
Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released fromby my body which was immerscoated in sweat.
"Immersed" suggest you were say in a body of liquid like a bath. "Released from" suggests the chemicals left your body.
mMaybe these chemicals are one type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of pain then followed rebby relievef.
Start of a sentence needs a capital letter.
Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us develop a clear and focused spirit, relieved.
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Good work
June 26, 2023
Thank you so much for your corrections!:-)
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Running Make Me Relieved Running Running Makes Me Feel Relieved あるいは、 Running Relieves My Stress |
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About two years ago, I developed a long habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium. About two years ago, I developed a About two years ago, I developed a すごいですね！ |
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For some reason, however, I stopped till now. For some reason, however, I stopped until until - 'til could possibly by used as a very colloquial abbreviation. till is not the same thing. For some reason, however, I stopped until 「however」の使い方はとても上手です！ |
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During my running, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face. During my run During my run このの方が自然だと思います。リフレッシュできそうですね。 |
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My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life. My eyes always looked straight ahead and My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life. すごい文ですよ！This sounds very poetic to me. |
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Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released from my body which was immersed in sweat. Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released "Immersed" suggest you were say in a body of liquid like a bath. "Released from" suggests the chemicals left your body. Based on my personal running experience, it seems このの方が自然です。 |
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maybe these chemicals are one type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of pain then followed rebelieve.
Start of a sentence needs a capital letter.
面白そうです。 |
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Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us clear and focus spirit, relieved. Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us develop a clear and focused spirit Running is really a good and helpful 賛成しました！ |
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