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I usually wake up at 5:00 on Mondays because there is heavy traffic in the morning, so I have to leave for work earlier.
This happened this morning. I was driving my car when I suddenly noticed that I only had enough fuel for about 20 kilometers.
I changed direction toward a gas station.

I missed the turn to the closest station, so I decided to go to another nearby one. While I was heading there, I ran out of gas and my car stopped.

Corrections

I usually wake up at 5:00 on Mondays, because there is heavy traffic in the morning, so I have to leave for work earlier.I have to leave for work earlier due to heavy traffic in the morning.

Reworded to avoid a run-on sentence.

This happened this morning.

I was driving my car when I suddenly noticed that I only had enough fuel for about 20 kilometers.

I missed the turn to the closest station, so I decided to go to another one nearby one.

While I was heading there, I ran out of gas and my car stopped.

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Runeid from Bensin


I usually wake up at 5:00 on Mondays because there is heavy traffic in the morning, so I have to leave for work earlier.


I usually wake up at 5:00 on Mondays, because there is heavy traffic in the morning, so I have to leave for work earlier.I have to leave for work earlier due to heavy traffic in the morning.

Reworded to avoid a run-on sentence.

This happened this morning.


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I was driving my car when I suddenly noticed that I only had enough fuel for about 20 kilometers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I changed direction toward a gas station.


I missed the turn to the closest station, so I decided to go to another nearby one.


I missed the turn to the closest station, so I decided to go to another one nearby one.

While I was heading there, I ran out of gas and my car stopped.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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