yesterday
Runaway
I feel like I've been discovered and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want to. They saw me and they laughed.
If a person tells u they love you by the way you are, why would they disrespect you for the same reason ?
They saw me and they laughed.
At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, runaway and start fresh but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes, after all I can't change who I am even if I want to so badly.
Runaway
I feel like I've been discovered and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want to.
They saw me and they laughed.
If a person tells u they love you by the way you are, why would they disrespect you for the same reason ?
They saw me and they laughed.
At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, runaway and start fresh, but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes, a. After all, I can't change who I am, even if I want to so badly.
Runaway
I feel like I've been discoverexposed and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want to.
"Discover" is like someone went on a quest to find something whereas
"Exposed" is like someone found something that wasn't meant to be seen
They saw me and they laughed.
If a person tells u they love you by the way you are, why would they disrespect you for the same reason ?
They saw me and they just laughed.
adding the "just" in this sentence will break up the repetition and add to the humility
At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, runaway and start fresh but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes, after all I can't change who I am even if I want to so badly.
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I just added a few extra words, but your feelings come through extremely clear. I am sorry you had to go through an experience like this and I hope that expressing it in another language will be the medicine to get through this tough time <3
Runaway
I feel like I've been discovered and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want to.
They saw me and they laughed.
If a person tells you they love you byecause of the way you are, why would they disrespect you for the same reason ?
They saw me and they laughed.
At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, run away and start fresh but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes, a. After all I can't change who I am, even if I want to so badly.
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If a person tells u they love you by the way you are, why would they disrespect you for the same reason ? If a person tells you they love you b This sentence has been marked as perfect! If a person tells u they love you by the way you are, why would they disrespect you for the same reason |
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They saw me and they laughed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They saw me and they just laughed. adding the "just" in this sentence will break up the repetition and add to the humility This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, runaway and start fresh but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes, after all I can't change who I am even if I want to so badly. At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, run away and start fresh but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes This sentence has been marked as perfect! At this point my only desire is to disappear into the thin air, runaway and start fresh, but this action would only set in motion the same mistakes |
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Runaway This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel like I've been discovered and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want to. I feel like I've been discovered and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want to. I feel like I've been "Discover" is like someone went on a quest to find something whereas "Exposed" is like someone found something that wasn't meant to be seen I feel like I've been discovered and unwrapped, stripped, even, by someone I didn't want |
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