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kiwy

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Run, Run As Quickly As You Can

I read a news that it call the national break as "China’s annual October holiday."
I also read some news that there are more and more public policies which bad for women introducing, I felt horrible and want to escape quickly. I told my girl friends to take care, one of them, who grew up with me, told me that she is pregnant for 21 weeks. I am totally surprised, and hope her going well. The other told me that she doesn't want to see a doctor, because all doctor advised her to be pregnant to battle her illness, which betrayed her will. Furthermore, there is nothing can cure her illness, what she need to do are keep a healthy lifestyle. Yes, to be a mother, excatly to have children, is nearly the very most important thing to most of Chinese, what's worse, they think everyone should have the same thought and do the same thing like them. It is really a horrible situation. When a girl is over 25, people around her will always ask her where her boyfriend is, if she don't have one, they will introduce someone male to her even though they don't know him well. However, they think age under 25 is still young, so the man they introducing will be not too old. When a girl is over 30 but still single, people will gossip her, and blame her too captious to have a husband. They will also try to introduce some men to her, whose age is most from 35 to 50, or single father with kids.
They think, women over 30 is too old to have rights to choose a good husband. Old women's fate are being chosen, the quality of the man isn't important, only if he is male, that's enough. Women need to get married, they also need to have kids, only then when they are old, can they be taken care by their families. In fact, most wives haven't gotten any care from their families in China, while no matter how old they are, they are always being asked to take care of the families, not only their husbands but also their grandchilren. What the funniest is that some women who are suffering this still ask you (even you just meet) to get married.
That's why I always ask my girl students to study harder, to be independent, to have more choice. But it seems that nobody understand.
What can I do is keepking talking to myself: run, just run, run as quickly as you can.

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Run, Run As Quickly As You Can

I read a news that it callarticle about the national break known as "China’s annual October holiday.

I also read some news saying that there are more and more public policies whichthat are bad for women introducing, I felt hoterrible and wanted to escape it quickly.

I told my girl friends to take care, o. One of them, who grew up with me, told me that she ishas been pregnant for 21 weeks.

I amwas totally surprised, and hope sher g is doing well.

The other told me that she doesn't want to see a doctor, because all the doctors advised her to bcontinue the pregnant tocy while battleing her illness, which betrayed her willshe doesn’t want.

Furthermore, there is nothing that can cure her illness, what she needs to do areis keep a healthy lifestyle.

Yes, tTo be a mother, excatly to have children, is nearly the very most important thing to most of Chinese, w. What's worse, they think everyone should have the same thoughts and do the same thing likes as them.

It is really a horrible situation.

When a girl is over 25, people around her will always ask her where her boyfriend is, if she don't have one, they will introduce someone male to her even though they don't know him well.

However, they think agebeing under 25 is still young, so the man they introducing will be noe usually isn’t too old.

When a girl is over 30 but still single, people will gossip about her, and blame hersay she’s too captious to have a husband.

They will also try to introduce some men to her, whose age is most from is either between the age of 35 toand 50, or a single father with kids.

They think, women over 30 isare too old to have the rights to choose a good husband.

Old women's fates are being chosen, the quality of the man isn't important, only if he is malea man, that's enough.

Women need to get married, they also need to have kids, only then when they are old, can they be taken care by their families.

In fact, most wives haven't gotten any care from their families in China, while no matter how old they are, they are always being asked to take care of the families, not only their husbands but also their grandchilren.

What tThe funniest part is, that some women who are suffering from this still ask you (even you just meet) to get married.

That's why I always ask my girltell my female students to study harder, to be independent, to have more choice.

But it seems that nobody understands.

What I can I do is keepking talking toto just keep telling myself: run, just run, run as quickly as you can.

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Really good grammar and vocabulary! It sounds a little awkward at certain parts, but overall it is fairly easy to understand.

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kiwy

Oct. 11, 2021

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Thank you.

Run, Run As Quickly As You Can

I read a news article that it called the national break as "China’s annual October holiday.

"

I also read some news that there are more and more public policiesgovernment policies being introduced which are bad for women introducing,. I felt horrible and it made me want to escape quickly.

可以解释一下这些新的政策吗?我很好奇

I told my girl friends to take care, o. One of them, who grew up with me, told me that she is pregnant for 21 weeks21 weeks pregnant.

I am totally surprised, and hope herit is going well for her.

The Another told me that she doesn't want to see a doctor, because all doctor's she's seen have advised her to beget pregnant to battle her illness, which betrayed her willis a complete dismissal of her autonomy.

Furthermore, there is nothing she can do that can cure her illness, what she needs to do are keepis maintain a healthy lifestyle.

Yes, tTo be a mother, exspecificatlly to have children, is nearpractically the very most important thing to most of Chinese, w people. What's worse, is that they think everyone should have the same thoughmindset and do the same thing likes as them.

It is really is a horrible situation.

When a girl is over 25, people around her will always ask her where her boyfriend is, i. If she doesn't have one, they will introduce someone maleguys to her even though tshey doesn't know himthen that well.

However, they think agegirls under 25 isare still young, so the maen they introducing will be are not too old.

When a girl is over 30 but still single, people will gossip about her, and blame her too captious to have a husbandfor being too picky to settle down.

They will also try to introduce some men to her, whose age is mostly range from 35 to 50, orsometimes single fathers with kids.

They think, that women over 30 isare too old to have the rights to choose a good husband.

Old women's fate are being chosen, t for them. The quality of the man isn't important, only if he is male, that'just being male is enough.

Women need to get married, they also need to have kids, o. Only then, when they are old, can they be taken care of by their families.

In factTruthfully, most wives haven't gotten anybeen taken care fromof by their families in China, whileand, no matter how old they are, they are always being asked to take care of their families, not only their husbands but also their grandchildren.

What theis funniest is that some women who are suffering this way still ask you (even youif you've just meet) to get married.

That's why I always ask my girl students to study harder, to be independent, to hagive themselves more choices.

But it seems that nobody understands.

What can I do is keepking talk saying to myself: run, just run, run as quickly as you can.

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Nice writing! China definitely has a relatively tradition-oriented society still, but hopefully as the new generations grow up that will start to change.

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kiwy

Oct. 11, 2021

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When a girl is over 25, people around her will always ask her where her boyfriend is, i. If she doesn't have one, they will introduce someone maleguys to her even though tshey doesn't know himthen that well.

Nonono, it is the people who want to introduce don't know the guy they are going to inrtroduce well, not the girl. That is the most ironic, so I want to taunt it.

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kiwy

Oct. 11, 2021

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I am quite pessimistic of the new generation, because they grew up in a closed situation with the firewall of the Internet. Some of them are patriotic so much, and they are also aggressive.

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sivanc

Oct. 11, 2021

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Nonono, it is the people who want to introduce don't know the guy they are going to inrtroduce well, not the girl. That is the most ironic, so I want to taunt it.

Ok, then just change "she doesn't" back to "they don't"

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sivanc

Oct. 11, 2021

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I am quite pessimistic of the new generation, because they grew up in a closed situation with the firewall of the Internet. Some of them are patriotic so much, and they are also aggressive.

I think on the one hand that china could stand to be more socially progressive, but also I don't think that combatting western influence is the worst thing ever.

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kiwy

Oct. 11, 2021

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I also read some news that there are more and more public policiesgovernment policies being introduced which are bad for women introducing,. I felt horrible and it made me want to escape quickly.

Because of the three children policy, it is getting harder and harder to abort, no matter how badly the situation of the women are. So are the vasetomy. And some gynecology surgeries are also getting harder. In conlusion, anything relative to fertility is being controlling harshly.

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I read a news that it call the national break as "China’s annual October holiday.


I read a news article that it called the national break as "China’s annual October holiday.

I read a news that it callarticle about the national break known as "China’s annual October holiday.

"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also read some news that there are more and more public policies which bad for women introducing, I felt horrible and want to escape quickly.


I also read some news that there are more and more public policiesgovernment policies being introduced which are bad for women introducing,. I felt horrible and it made me want to escape quickly.

可以解释一下这些新的政策吗?我很好奇

I also read some news saying that there are more and more public policies whichthat are bad for women introducing, I felt hoterrible and wanted to escape it quickly.

I told my girl friends to take care, one of them, who grew up with me, told me that she is pregnant for 21 weeks.


I told my girl friends to take care, o. One of them, who grew up with me, told me that she is pregnant for 21 weeks21 weeks pregnant.

I told my girl friends to take care, o. One of them, who grew up with me, told me that she ishas been pregnant for 21 weeks.

I am totally surprised, and hope her going well.


I am totally surprised, and hope herit is going well for her.

I amwas totally surprised, and hope sher g is doing well.

The other told me that she doesn't want to see a doctor, because all doctor advised her to be pregnant to battle her illness, which betrayed her will.


The Another told me that she doesn't want to see a doctor, because all doctor's she's seen have advised her to beget pregnant to battle her illness, which betrayed her willis a complete dismissal of her autonomy.

The other told me that she doesn't want to see a doctor, because all the doctors advised her to bcontinue the pregnant tocy while battleing her illness, which betrayed her willshe doesn’t want.

Furthermore, there is nothing can cure her illness, what she need to do are keep a healthy lifestyle.


Furthermore, there is nothing she can do that can cure her illness, what she needs to do are keepis maintain a healthy lifestyle.

Furthermore, there is nothing that can cure her illness, what she needs to do areis keep a healthy lifestyle.

Yes, to be a mother, excatly to have children, is nearly the very most important thing to most of Chinese, what's worse, they think everyone should have the same thought and do the same thing like them.


Yes, tTo be a mother, exspecificatlly to have children, is nearpractically the very most important thing to most of Chinese, w people. What's worse, is that they think everyone should have the same thoughmindset and do the same thing likes as them.

Yes, tTo be a mother, excatly to have children, is nearly the very most important thing to most of Chinese, w. What's worse, they think everyone should have the same thoughts and do the same thing likes as them.

It is really a horrible situation.


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It is really is a horrible situation.

When a girl is over 25, people around her will always ask her where her boyfriend is, if she don't have one, they will introduce someone male to her even though they don't know him well.


When a girl is over 25, people around her will always ask her where her boyfriend is, i. If she doesn't have one, they will introduce someone maleguys to her even though tshey doesn't know himthen that well.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, they think age under 25 is still young, so the man they introducing will be not too old.


However, they think agegirls under 25 isare still young, so the maen they introducing will be are not too old.

However, they think agebeing under 25 is still young, so the man they introducing will be noe usually isn’t too old.

When a girl is over 30 but still single, people will gossip her, and blame her too captious to have a husband.


When a girl is over 30 but still single, people will gossip about her, and blame her too captious to have a husbandfor being too picky to settle down.

When a girl is over 30 but still single, people will gossip about her, and blame hersay she’s too captious to have a husband.

They will also try to introduce some men to her, whose age is most from 35 to 50, or single father with kids.


They will also try to introduce some men to her, whose age is mostly range from 35 to 50, orsometimes single fathers with kids.

They will also try to introduce some men to her, whose age is most from is either between the age of 35 toand 50, or a single father with kids.

They think, women over 30 is too old to have rights to choose a good husband.


They think, that women over 30 isare too old to have the rights to choose a good husband.

They think, women over 30 isare too old to have the rights to choose a good husband.

Old women's fate are being chosen, the quality of the man isn't important, only if he is male, that's enough.


Old women's fate are being chosen, t for them. The quality of the man isn't important, only if he is male, that'just being male is enough.

Old women's fates are being chosen, the quality of the man isn't important, only if he is malea man, that's enough.

Women need to get married, they also need to have kids, only then when they are old, can they be taken care by their families.


Women need to get married, they also need to have kids, o. Only then, when they are old, can they be taken care of by their families.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In fact, most wives haven't gotten any care from their families in China, while no matter how old they are, they are always being asked to take care of the families, not only their husbands but also their grandchilren.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In factTruthfully, most wives haven't gotten anybeen taken care fromof by their families in China, whileand, no matter how old they are, they are always being asked to take care of their families, not only their husbands but also their grandchildren.

What the funniest is that some women who are suffering this still ask you (even you just meet) to get married.


What theis funniest is that some women who are suffering this way still ask you (even youif you've just meet) to get married.

What tThe funniest part is, that some women who are suffering from this still ask you (even you just meet) to get married.

That's why I always ask my girl students to study harder, to be independent, to have more choice.


That's why I always ask my girl students to study harder, to be independent, to hagive themselves more choices.

That's why I always ask my girltell my female students to study harder, to be independent, to have more choice.

But it seems that nobody understand.


But it seems that nobody understands.

But it seems that nobody understands.

What can I do is keepking talking to myself: run, just run, run as quickly as you can.


What can I do is keepking talk saying to myself: run, just run, run as quickly as you can.

What I can I do is keepking talking toto just keep telling myself: run, just run, run as quickly as you can.

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