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kiwy

Oct. 20, 2021

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Run, Keep Running

I ran another 5km tonight. At the beginning, my legs felt sore, so I thought that maybe I could just run about 2km. To run more, I thought a lot of things. For example, I tried to memorise Geman that I'd learnt recently, however, I thought nothing. Then, I tried to think about the self-introduction in English, which for the APS exam. Luckily, I wrote several paragraphs in my mind. When I'd run 3km, I kept encouraging myself: just hold on, try your best to run one more round. As a result, I ran many rounds and finally reach my goal.
I am so happy I've done this. And then I think that I can do this, I can do anything else as well. I just need to keep moving step by step and hold on.

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Run, Keep Running

I ran another 5km tonight.

At the beginning, my legs felt sore, so I thought that maybe I cwould just run aboutonly run 2km.

TIn order to run more, I thought about a lot of things.

For example, I tried to memorise Geman that I'd learnt recently, however, I thought nothingmy mind was blank.

Then, I tried to think about the self-introduction in English, which I had to do for the APS exam.

Luckily, I wroFortunately, I was able to write several paragraphs in my mind.

When I'd run 3km, I kept encouraging myself: just hold on, try your best to run one more round.

As a result, I ran many rounds and finally reach my goal.

I am so happy that I've done this.

And tThen I think thatought, if I can do this, I can do anything else as well.

I just need to keep moving step by step and hold on.

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Nice writing! And congrats on the run. That's a good attitude to have.

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kiwy

Oct. 21, 2021

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Thanks.

Run, Keep Running


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I ran another 5km tonight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the beginning, my legs felt sore, so I thought that maybe I could just run about 2km.


At the beginning, my legs felt sore, so I thought that maybe I cwould just run aboutonly run 2km.

To run more, I thought a lot of things.


TIn order to run more, I thought about a lot of things.

For example, I tried to memorise Geman that I'd learnt recently, however, I thought nothing.


For example, I tried to memorise Geman that I'd learnt recently, however, I thought nothingmy mind was blank.

Then, I tried to think about the self-introduction in English, which for the APS exam.


Then, I tried to think about the self-introduction in English, which I had to do for the APS exam.

Luckily, I wrote several paragraphs in my mind.


Luckily, I wroFortunately, I was able to write several paragraphs in my mind.

When I'd run 3km, I kept encouraging myself: just hold on, try your best to run one more round.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As a result, I ran many rounds and finally reach my goal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so happy I've done this.


I am so happy that I've done this.

And then I think that I can do this, I can do anything else as well.


And tThen I think thatought, if I can do this, I can do anything else as well.

I just need to keep moving step by step and hold on.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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